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Eyes & Lips

Deep pools of blue as I drown inside them I can't get out No matter how hard I try As I look inside I see those golden flecks And I sigh As I look deeper and we get closer You bring your Soft lips to mine Red and full Like cherry candy They taste so fine In bliss together Our lips a crimson And both pairs of eyes do shine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/16/2009 2:41:00 PM
love this one...so vivid and heartfelt...grrth
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Date: 7/11/2009 6:00:00 AM
Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you Savannah!
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Date: 7/10/2009 12:25:00 AM
Savannah, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/8/2009 8:37:00 AM
Wow, I really like this poem!!! It is very unique and to the point but yet still has suspence
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Date: 7/7/2009 7:29:00 AM
Like your poem very expressive. Sara
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem, beautiful write Savannah>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 6:50:00 AM
What a dedication. Congratulations on your featured poem this week Savannah. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:49:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your friends. Congratulations on being featured. Ernilando
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Date: 5/12/2009 1:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem! A wonderful tribute to your friends, very talented words!
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Date: 4/29/2009 10:51:00 AM
lovely!!!
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Date: 4/28/2009 12:31:00 PM
Passionate write, romanticism at its best...Raul
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