Eyeful Luck

Her lingerie strap slipped down on catwalk
Men by the ramp waited for eyeful luck
Close to chest she clutched the dress
Her lewd smile didn’t show distress 
Unblinking men found their raised thumps to suck.

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June 1, 2022
Syllable count : 10/10/7//7/10 (HMS)
Contest : A Funny Limerick-Any Theme
Sponsored by : Tania Kitchin
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Roper Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 9:16 PM
Congratulations on your win in Tania’s contest.I like your limerick.. Men will be men when they are shown what is not to be shown. Blessings my friend
Goldsmith Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 1:58 PM
Congratulations on your win. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............
Chamberlain Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 12:51 PM
Seems like everyone got an eye full. :-) haha congratulations on your winning placement.
Kitchin Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Subimal. congratulations on your winning placement with your creative limerick!
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