Eyeful, Handful and Soulful

With stretched brows, while sitting in a corner I look up from my specs just out of love. As she lays food on table and stoops lower Snipes me from grace of her body thereof. With eyes on her I come there as if drugged Feeling tickling smell of the hot soup. Now she puts a sheaf of flowers in a jug And pours in water pressing it in group. I see how the necks and cups get entwined With the curls of her hair and points of crest. See how at each stalk her waist curves defined Budding, abloom in the shape of her breasts. Soup and food lay cold and my body warm As she swirls and whirls her skirt like a storm.
+++ December 15, 2014 Form: Sonnet (Pentameter) First Place win Best of 2014 by Carol Eastman

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Date: 12/26/2014 10:16:00 PM
DR RAM,, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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Date: 12/24/2014 1:52:00 PM
Very passionate winning work..Way to go..Glad that you shared this one with soup..Congrates..Sara
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Date: 12/23/2014 1:31:00 AM
A very creative and beautiful use of metaphors here... Congrats on your win with this passionate work!
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Date: 12/18/2014 1:34:00 PM
I would like to have been in another alcove watching you, watching her. That would be another poem altogether. A passionate piece. Congratulations, I would rate this as one of your best among many.
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Date: 12/18/2014 8:05:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, Very well crafted creation with brilliant images. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl
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Date: 12/18/2014 7:19:00 AM
A beautiful storm....Congrats onb your win Dr Ram
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Date: 12/18/2014 6:41:00 AM
Very well written. Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:14:00 PM
congratulations on your win Dr. M :o)
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Date: 12/17/2014 3:05:00 PM
such a sensual write with wonderful imagery - congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 12/17/2014 11:27:00 AM
Wow! This is lovely...
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:39:00 PM
Dr. Ram this very powerful and sensual. I love the imagery. Well done. Kilmer
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:26:00 PM
Wow, wow, wow! Hot stuff, Dr. Ram, and I'm not talking about the food. A passionate one from you written eloquently...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 12/16/2014 10:51:00 AM
Wow, Dr. Mehta! What a lovely story. When love strikes, it hits like a hammer. It reminds me of one of my favourite songs years ago. Afternoon delight.
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