Eyeful, Handful and Soulful

With stretched brows, while sitting in a corner I look up from my specs just out of love. As she lays food on table and stoops lower Snipes me from grace of her body thereof. With eyes on her I come there as if drugged Feeling tickling smell of the hot soup. Now she puts a sheaf of flowers in a jug And pours in water pressing it in group. I see how the necks and cups get entwined With the curls of her hair and points of crest. See how at each stalk her waist curves defined Budding, abloom in the shape of her breasts. Soup and food lay cold and my body warm As she swirls and whirls her skirt like a storm.
+++ December 15, 2014 Form: Sonnet (Pentameter) First Place win Best of 2014 by Carol Eastman
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December 26, 2014 at 10:16 PM
DR RAM,, Awesome Best of 2014 poem, and win.... Congrats.... Linda
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December 24, 2014 at 1:52 PM
Very passionate winning work..Way to go..Glad that you shared this one with soup..Congrates..Sara
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December 23, 2014 at 1:31 AM
A very creative and beautiful use of metaphors here... Congrats on your win with this passionate work!
Poteet Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 1:34 PM
I would like to have been in another alcove watching you, watching her. That would be another poem altogether. A passionate piece. Congratulations, I would rate this as one of your best among many.
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December 18, 2014 at 8:05 AM
Good morning Dr. Mehta, Very well crafted creation with brilliant images. Congratulations on your excellent win. Earl
May Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 7:19 AM
A beautiful storm....Congrats onb your win Dr Ram
Carmack Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Very well written. Congrats to you.
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:14 PM
congratulations on your win Dr. M :o)
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 3:05 PM
such a sensual write with wonderful imagery - congrats Dr Mehta:-) Hugs jan xxx
Bateson Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 11:27 AM
Wow! This is lovely...
Kilmer Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 10:39 PM
Dr. Ram this very powerful and sensual. I love the imagery. Well done. Kilmer
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December 16, 2014 at 10:26 PM
Wow, wow, wow! Hot stuff, Dr. Ram, and I'm not talking about the food. A passionate one from you written eloquently...hugs, Rhonda
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December 16, 2014 at 10:51 AM
Wow, Dr. Mehta! What a lovely story. When love strikes, it hits like a hammer. It reminds me of one of my favourite songs years ago. Afternoon delight.
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