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Picture Prompt Contest by Magarita Lillico - July 7, 2024

Eye To Eye


There's a stare down at the brook, eye to eye
Tiger roared, "MOVE." Donkey did not comply
One hee-haw from the ass
The Bengal let him pass
And kept on running til he reached Mumbai

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Duke Beaufort

July 26, 2024 at 5:59 AM

Mark, really cute limerick you created. Really wonderful and funny!!!

Jan Allison

July 21, 2024 at 3:36 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) by the way i did post a risque poem from the next book but i wont be posting any more. it's not worth the risk of snide poop poet comments:-( hugs jan xx

thriveni c mysore

July 19, 2024 at 7:24 PM

congratulations. happy writing.

Andrea Dietrich

July 18, 2024 at 1:01 PM

this is very very good. BIG congrats

Mark Toney

July 18, 2024 at 9:46 AM

Hi, Mark. I enjoyed the donkey's close call, and your title sets the tone. Congratulations on your win!

Terry Miller

July 18, 2024 at 1:46 AM

Great limerick, congratulations.

Eileen Manassian

July 11, 2024 at 9:31 PM

Wow! Excellent. I really like your take on this. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Mark Koplin

July 12, 2024 at 9:21 AM

Thanks Eleen. Your potd deserved to be respected.

Beryl Edmonds

July 7, 2024 at 2:20 AM

This gave me a laugh Mark, a great Limerick… Beryl

Mark Koplin

July 10, 2024 at 5:01 AM

Thanks so much Beryl.

Lin Lane

July 6, 2024 at 8:08 PM

This is an excellent limerick, Mark!

Mark Koplin

July 10, 2024 at 5:01 AM

Thanks Lin. Loved the picture.

Jan Allison

July 6, 2024 at 9:18 AM

ha ha ha this is such fun Mark, i especially like the use of Mumbai lol:-) I'm so glad to see you joining in the limerick fun. i may have to do a collaboration - not done one in a long time, that said I seldom post limericks on the site any more. hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

July 6, 2024 at 10:27 AM

I'm working on risque rhymes and toilet humour poems for next book - wont be posting any on soup

Mark Koplin

July 6, 2024 at 9:21 AM

We've both been busy with other things. Thanks Jan. A collaboration sound like fun.