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Picture Prompt Contest by Magarita Lillico  -  July 7, 2024

There's a stare down at the brook, eye to eye Tiger roared, "MOVE." Donkey did not comply One hee-haw from the ass The Bengal let him pass And kept on running til he reached Mumbai

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Date: 7/26/2024 5:59:00 AM
Mark, really cute limerick you created. Really wonderful and funny!!!
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Date: 7/21/2024 3:36:00 AM
Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) by the way i did post a risque poem from the next book but i wont be posting any more. it's not worth the risk of snide poop poet comments:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/19/2024 7:24:00 PM
congratulations. happy writing.
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Date: 7/18/2024 1:01:00 PM
this is very very good. BIG congrats
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Date: 7/18/2024 9:46:00 AM
Hi, Mark. I enjoyed the donkey's close call, and your title sets the tone. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/18/2024 1:46:00 AM
Great limerick, congratulations.
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Date: 7/11/2024 9:31:00 PM
Wow! Excellent. I really like your take on this. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your visit to my page.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/12/2024 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Eleen. Your potd deserved to be respected.
Date: 7/7/2024 2:20:00 AM
This gave me a laugh Mark, a great Limerick… Beryl
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/10/2024 5:01:00 AM
Thanks so much Beryl.
Date: 7/6/2024 8:08:00 PM
This is an excellent limerick, Mark!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/10/2024 5:01:00 AM
Thanks Lin. Loved the picture.
Date: 7/6/2024 9:18:00 AM
ha ha ha this is such fun Mark, i especially like the use of Mumbai lol:-) I'm so glad to see you joining in the limerick fun. i may have to do a collaboration - not done one in a long time, that said I seldom post limericks on the site any more. hugs jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2024 10:27:00 AM
I'm working on risque rhymes and toilet humour poems for next book - wont be posting any on soup
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Mark Koplin
Date: 7/6/2024 9:21:00 AM
We've both been busy with other things. Thanks Jan. A collaboration sound like fun.

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