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Picture Prompt Contest by Magarita Lillico - July 7, 2024

Eye To Eye


There's a stare down at the brook, eye to eye
Tiger roared, "MOVE." Donkey did not comply
One hee-haw from the ass
The Bengal let him pass
And kept on running til he reached Mumbai

humorlimerick

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/26/2024 5:59:00 AM

Mark, really cute limerick you created. Really wonderful and funny!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/21/2024 3:36:00 AM

Dropping back to say many congrats on your win:-) by the way i did post a risque poem from the next book but i wont be posting any more. it's not worth the risk of snide poop poet comments:-( hugs jan xx

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/19/2024 7:24:00 PM

congratulations. happy writing.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/18/2024 1:01:00 PM

this is very very good. BIG congrats

Mark Toney

Date: 7/18/2024 9:46:00 AM

Hi, Mark. I enjoyed the donkey's close call, and your title sets the tone. Congratulations on your win!

Terry Miller

Date: 7/18/2024 1:46:00 AM

Great limerick, congratulations.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/11/2024 9:31:00 PM

Wow! Excellent. I really like your take on this. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your visit to my page.

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/12/2024 9:21:00 AM

Thanks Eleen. Your potd deserved to be respected.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/7/2024 2:20:00 AM

This gave me a laugh Mark, a great Limerick… Beryl

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/10/2024 5:01:00 AM

Thanks so much Beryl.

Lin Lane

Date: 7/6/2024 8:08:00 PM

This is an excellent limerick, Mark!

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/10/2024 5:01:00 AM

Thanks Lin. Loved the picture.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/6/2024 9:18:00 AM

ha ha ha this is such fun Mark, i especially like the use of Mumbai lol:-) I'm so glad to see you joining in the limerick fun. i may have to do a collaboration - not done one in a long time, that said I seldom post limericks on the site any more. hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/6/2024 10:27:00 AM

I'm working on risque rhymes and toilet humour poems for next book - wont be posting any on soup

Mark Koplin
Date: 7/6/2024 9:21:00 AM

We've both been busy with other things. Thanks Jan. A collaboration sound like fun.

Eye To Eye

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