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Eye of the Beholder

'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder'

Cherry Cream Cheese Cake 
high quality virgin eyes
please don't take my slice!

:-)

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Rochelle Harris

Date: 4/26/2015 9:50:00 PM

"Sweet"! ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/19/2015 6:54:00 PM

This title caught my eye. I really enjoyed contemplating this haiku Linda. Cheers, Connie

Robin Davis

Date: 4/28/2014 7:35:00 AM

PD What a creative and interesting way to write about "innocence" and desire. Thank you for the nice comment on my Happen To You poem.

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

Date: 1/23/2014 5:03:00 AM

Never read a better imagination around cheese cakes. I enjoyed this beautiful piece of work.

James Fraser

Date: 12/23/2013 12:59:00 PM

McYummy desire for Cherry Cheesecake now, and to hell with the calories, James :P

Juliet Ligon

Date: 10/26/2013 7:03:00 PM

"Virgin eyes" eager to dig in to the cheesecake. Nice way to describe lust of the eyes and overwhelming desire. I'm adding you to my favs, too. : )

Erich Goller

Date: 10/13/2013 3:38:00 PM

indeed beauty is also skin deep.,a very nice expressed poem.,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Hugs!Erich

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/13/2013 10:30:00 AM

OF COURSE I WOULD NOT ID GIVE MINE TO YOU AS WELL

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/29/2013 11:49:00 PM

now you got me all greedy and starry eyes

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/25/2013 3:34:00 PM

Well who doesn't love cheese cake? especially when it sounds so sexy with virgin eyes :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/15/2013 3:40:00 AM

Yes, beauty IS in the eye of the beholder and I behold a true beauty... so PLEASE give me your slice of cheesecake Linda dear...You have given me a SEVERE case of sweet-tooth and my mouth is water... Ouch!

Jessica Renee Dawson

Date: 6/23/2013 5:35:00 PM

Brings happy thoughts of cheese cake, and the element of surprise with very few words— nice work!

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/23/2013 3:36:00 PM

Very strong similies you have brought to the poetry 'table' here P D..' well worded indeed Joe..)

Oshinowo Oluyinka

Date: 6/6/2013 2:49:00 PM

You are nice and cooool! This is what i think of you. thanks for knowing that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. but do you know that that love, the main thing resides in the heart to breath because it should be kept alive. simply call me Wisepen. one family: one interest: one desire. i remain loyal and honourable.