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Eye of the Beholder

'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder'

Cherry Cream Cheese Cake 
high quality virgin eyes
please don't take my slice!

:-)

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Rochelle Harris

April 26, 2015 at 9:50 PM

"Sweet"! ...walkin' on sunshine...Rochelle

Connie Marcum Wong

February 19, 2015 at 6:54 PM

This title caught my eye. I really enjoyed contemplating this haiku Linda. Cheers, Connie

Robin Davis

April 28, 2014 at 7:35 AM

PD What a creative and interesting way to write about "innocence" and desire. Thank you for the nice comment on my Happen To You poem.

Archana Kapoor Nagpal

January 23, 2014 at 5:03 AM

Never read a better imagination around cheese cakes. I enjoyed this beautiful piece of work.

James Fraser

December 23, 2013 at 12:59 PM

McYummy desire for Cherry Cheesecake now, and to hell with the calories, James :P

Juliet Ligon

October 26, 2013 at 7:03 PM

"Virgin eyes" eager to dig in to the cheesecake. Nice way to describe lust of the eyes and overwhelming desire. I'm adding you to my favs, too. : )

Erich Goller

October 13, 2013 at 3:38 PM

indeed beauty is also skin deep.,a very nice expressed poem.,I enjoyed reading it.God bless you,Hugs!Erich

Liam Mcdaid

September 13, 2013 at 10:30 AM

OF COURSE I WOULD NOT ID GIVE MINE TO YOU AS WELL

Danesh Morgan

August 29, 2013 at 11:49 PM

now you got me all greedy and starry eyes

Karen Anglesey

August 25, 2013 at 3:34 PM

Well who doesn't love cheese cake? especially when it sounds so sexy with virgin eyes :)

Tim Ryerson

July 15, 2013 at 3:40 AM

Yes, beauty IS in the eye of the beholder and I behold a true beauty... so PLEASE give me your slice of cheesecake Linda dear...You have given me a SEVERE case of sweet-tooth and my mouth is water... Ouch!

Jessica Renee Dawson

June 23, 2013 at 5:35 PM

Brings happy thoughts of cheese cake, and the element of surprise with very few words— nice work!

Joe Maverick

June 23, 2013 at 3:36 PM

Very strong similies you have brought to the poetry 'table' here P D..' well worded indeed Joe..)

Oshinowo Oluyinka

June 6, 2013 at 2:49 PM

You are nice and cooool! This is what i think of you. thanks for knowing that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. but do you know that that love, the main thing resides in the heart to breath because it should be kept alive. simply call me Wisepen. one family: one interest: one desire. i remain loyal and honourable.