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I plunge, headfirst, to swim your eyes, and search their depths for the soul of your mysteries ... should I lose myself among the eddies there, or the shadowy abundance of your passions pull me to the warm dark of your abyss, there is no other earthly place ... I'd rather drown. Submitted on May 2, 2020 To the "Brian's Choice 1, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest Brian Strand, Sponsor.

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Sonia Walker

Date: 5/6/2020 8:28:00 AM

Gregory, congratulations on your top billing. Such a beautiful poem to read over and over. ~ Sonia

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/3/2020 2:39:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations, Greg!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/3/2020 9:50:00 AM

Succinct yet so mesmerizing, Greg:-) Heartiest congratulations on your first placement with this keeper. Had to FAV...

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/20/2018 2:02:00 PM

Hello Gregory, i feel the love you put into this poem. have a nice day my friend.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/20/2018 7:36:00 PM

Thank you very much, Darlene, I greatly appreciate the kind words! :-) <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2018 3:41:00 AM

Very lovely Greg. You found a great photo to go with it too! : )

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/20/2018 4:03:00 AM

Thank you very much, Connie - I'm pleased you enjoyed it! :-) <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/18/2018 5:29:00 PM

A beauty of a poem! GL!

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2018 10:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim! No placement, but no worries - your comment is my prize! :-) <3

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/17/2018 7:32:00 PM

ew la la kinda good this is! All the best ... CayCay

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2018 10:51:00 PM

That's very sweey of you, CayCay - thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/17/2018 1:52:00 PM

Eyes mirror the soul. The depth of love, is found within the heart. Your words are breathtaking and they truly move me. "Deep Within" is a poem that I posted here, and it reflects such thoughts. Maybe when you have time, you can read it. :) Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2018 10:50:00 PM

This is very kind of you, Brandy, and I greatly appreciate the wonderful comment! I love your "Deep Within", (read and commented), and can't wait to read more of your work! :-) <3

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/17/2018 8:18:00 AM

Completely submerged. Wonderful. xomo

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2018 10:49:00 PM

Many kind thanks, Dear Mo! :-) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 8/17/2018 7:03:00 AM

very sensual Greg and I love the pic:-) hugs jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/18/2018 10:48:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jan, I so appreciate it! :-) <3