Eye-Opener

EYE-OPENER Heavy lids held open with weighted mug of crushed beans. 10/13/2017

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Abed Anthony

Date: 11/20/2017 2:39:00 AM

Perfect reflection of a delicious soup's smell. Great work.

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/15/2017 9:18:00 PM

There's no mystery here... your poem is perfectly convolutedly crystal clear. Bravo.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2017 9:51:00 PM

LOL! Thanks!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/14/2017 8:02:00 AM

I can relate perfectly to this one-liner, Kim...I'm a coffee lover, black & strong! Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2017 10:09:00 PM

Thanks, Paul!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/13/2017 3:21:00 PM

Made me smile Kim ... but i'm a tea lover:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/14/2017 6:44:00 AM

<3 Jan :) I drink tea sometimes

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 10/13/2017 10:12:00 AM

NICE :) xomo!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2017 2:18:00 PM

Thanks Maureen!

Silent One

Date: 10/13/2017 8:57:00 AM

Coffee.... What would we do without it!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2017 9:16:00 AM

I love my morning coffee!!