Get Your Premium Membership

Extinct Eden

The skyline wheezes through gauze-thick breath, its lungs ossified in scaffolded sighs, where children etch constellations on smog, and pigeons strut in soot-stained pride. Dark as coal, and quieter than sleep, the city dreams in monochrome, its rivers choked with yesterday’s sins, its gardens traded for silicone. Traffic flows like veins in a dying beast, pumping noise into the marrow of stillness. We built this Eden out of exhaust and liturgy of engines. We now beg for the Adam's apple to drop back down.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/25/2025 5:42:00 AM
Inner city life, no substitute for Eden that's for sure. I like your descriptive lines, especially 7. Excellent write Abdul
Login to Reply
Woody Avatar
Tom Woody
Date: 7/25/2025 5:42:00 AM
Oh, and belated welcome to PS! Stop my way sometime

Book: Reflection on the Important Things