Extemporaneous Thoughts

It's gone. All gone...Probably forever
It didn't melt like an iceberg
It still exists in name but only in name
Technically, it's still viable
but realistically it's not the same

Gone are many that once kindly ladled
bowls of words that were delicious
replaced by 'things' that have no heart
By 'those' who don't appreciate the art
of holding their own pen in hand to write
By 'some' who think we've a blind eye
to their sudden scholarly wisdom

Nothing is the same and who is to blame

On most days I take a pass on visiting
the place where once I found pleasure
My measuring cup is empty and there are few
neighbors whose doors I would approach
I've no desire to 'borrow' their poems
only sorrow for what used to be
and is no more

Bored by changes and the rearranged pots
and pans. Everything has been shuffled
except the muffled cries of days gone by
The new knives have dull blades 
and everywhere I look is a new escapade
where even the cooktop is turned off

Scoff at the recipes where something's missing
It's the lack of flavor that I once savored
It used to be tasty but I'm weary
of cookbook titles that sound so dreary
What a waste of pure vanilla when a fella
or a dame pours it in beef stew
That cannot be misconstrued for poetry
Or when Ms. sous chef displays her version
of soup de jour, but burns it with the same 
bitter taste day after day

Tables have been moved around in what was once 
a restaurant on hallowed ground
The new menu is frightful... 
the old one was delightful
It's gone and I don't hold hope of a resurrection
I'd call pest control to eradicate the premises
if I felt the place could be saved
but it feels as if it's dug its own grave

The lilting music is gone, too
No longer does it play sweet melodies 
that make my feet want to dance
Keyboard keys don't rattle beneath my fingers
to open the door and enter
It's become humdrum, a chore to find
a valid reason to visit more often

It's gone and there's no joy to be found
in the ploy of the hoi polloi

Nothing is the same and who is to blame
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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La France Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 1:39 AM
Lin, your words cut me deep, yes the soup here lacks flavor, it is bitter, and the beauty that once was so wonderful is fading away. I miss your beautiful poetry in my contests, hope you are well dear poet, blessings, Constance ~
Greenhough Avatar
November 20, 2025 at 8:33 PM
I find agreement with you. Culture, whether it be language, recipes, or customs, is a valuable gift we should honor. Poetry helps us stay focused.
DiMino Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 7:28 AM
Write anyway, Lin; what you publish from the heart is posted to the latent conscious of humanity. It is posted spiritually. Some in society will get it, even those who have never read a lick of poetry. Those using AI will eventually lose interest...just as they have lost interest in truth and honesty. It is a quick fix world at the moment. Even love will short time not survive. Myself, I do not look for form or slickness -- if it is not, what I recognize as, original thought from the get-go...I do not read it. Blessings my friend.
Flood Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 5:35 PM
So very well put, Lin. I find Soup to be a chore now. I’d still put up with it I guess, but my head is empty as far as new ideas are concerned. I’m still gap filling with updating older stuff and telling the bots to tinkle some ivories, which is great fun, but I long to write something new… ho hum. For all my own reservations about New Soup, I couldn’t have put it any better than you did here. Shame it needed writing.
Barden Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 7:58 AM
It is very different, starkly so for me as I’ve been gone four years, but there are some things to depend on, like the wit and exemplary verse I find below your name consistently … and THAT … is why I returned. Superb write, amidst its rather sad boundaries. Loved it! :o) <3
Beaufort Avatar
October 20, 2025 at 8:03 AM
Lin, we hope to find and see sufficient happiness and joy in the places we exist and devote time to. When that doesn't happen, it can be from a change in the community. No question about it. In a way, we morn what we've lost and which seems to have vanished. What you've done with the cooking metaphor makes me think about what happens when the chefs have lost sight of the ambiance they tried so hard to manifest. In the meantime, I hope you are well and have time for your friends here. Smiles!!!
Lawless Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Well, Lin, there is this "Crap Throwing Theory". It states that some will throw crap at the wall in hopes that some will stick. The end result is eventually the wall is covered with crap and the crap throwers move on." The wall however is never the same. Nice write ...and too sadly true.
Lane Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 11:02 AM
You made me smile, John. Reminds me of Reagan’s statement about a wall. “Admin, get rid of the stinking wall!” It would be nice to breathe again in a clean environment.
M  Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 7:14 AM
Hi Lin….l agree with you totally its not the same …its lost its warmth and connection…and so many gone now! Such a shame! Great poem lovely Lin! Debx
Lane Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 7:42 AM
Hi, Deb. It would be nice if everything old was new again. Thanks for weighing in.
Read Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 6:36 AM
Hi Lin I get the feeling your not happy with what's going on,other than that I hope you're keeping well God bless.
Lane Avatar
October 18, 2025 at 6:42 AM
Change can be both well-placed and ill-fated. Like humans, everything has flaws, but it's in fixing them that change is good. I'm well, John and thank you for asking and for your thoughts.
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