Exquisite Lover

She longs for an exquisite lover
to engage between the sheets
Who caresses her deepest desires
as he quicken her heart beats

A man of unlimited passion
that is not inclined to rush
His one and only purpose
to elicit her body blush

The spirit of a musician
Light and firm in the perfect way
Her the perfect instrument 
for his practiced hands to play

She wants to experience perfection
from a release that’s so extreme 
Her own convulsions of pleasure 
as she lets out a raptured scream!

He longs for an exquisite lover
To engage between the sheets
Who’s deepest desires and passion
will quicken with his heart beats.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 4/29/2021 4:53:00 PM
Time to get out the candles or better yet let in the moonlight. Romantic and sensual write,Rich.
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Date: 3/30/2021 1:56:00 PM
very nice how you ended it with "he" and showing his unselfishness that he longs also for her to have what SHE longs for. "exquisite"
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/30/2021 2:09:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.;0)
Date: 3/9/2021 7:50:00 AM
yes..yes ..yes and more ! Thoroughly enjoyed . We should all be so fortunate "Her the perfect instrument for his practiced hands to play" Passion given and passion received. Hugs, Susan :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2021 4:08:00 PM
Your response brought an audible giggle. This comment alone made it worth writing this piece. Hugs Rick.
Date: 3/7/2021 3:11:00 PM
wow this is a sizzler! enjoyed.:)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/7/2021 6:15:00 PM
Thanks Charlotte, I enjoyed writing it. ;0)
Date: 3/5/2021 7:27:00 AM
Lovely... exquisite. Those who are good lovers should be adored.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/5/2021 7:58:00 AM
I do adore my sweetie. ;0)
Date: 2/25/2021 7:18:00 PM
Lovely descriptions, images...well-captured!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/26/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Kim. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/23/2021 4:07:00 AM
Wow. Sizzling with passion and promise. A exquisite lover indeed. Awesome write. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/23/2021 7:51:00 AM
Hi Cecilia, so nice to see you. How have you been? Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/22/2021 11:20:00 AM
Yum! A very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing with us Rick ;) - C.A.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2021 5:46:00 PM
My pleasure C.A. ;0)
Date: 2/22/2021 5:23:00 AM
... burning poem, Richard ... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/21/2021 8:21:00 PM
A lot of passion in these words. Great poem, Rick. Hope you have a great week :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Angela, I hope so too. Blessings to you as well.
Date: 2/21/2021 7:27:00 PM
Oh la la, sweet romantic, and sizzling :) Hello, Rick, I’m just enjoying your most beautiful and affectionate poem...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/22/2021 7:28:00 AM
Thanks Akkina. ;0)
Date: 2/20/2021 9:18:00 AM
Hi Rick, Hectic my friend, romantic and sissssssling , erotic and hot. well penned and enormously creative! Blessings, and hugs, Jennifer.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2021 6:09:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer, your visits always bring a smile. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/19/2021 2:29:00 PM
I see what you mean about harmonizing, Richard, although I think that you are the master with the bow -- and I'm just stringing along. Happy weekend, Gershon
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2021 6:10:00 AM
You as well my friend, also I think you underestimate your own virtuosity. ;0)
Date: 2/19/2021 6:29:00 AM
Just love this beautiful poetry Richard, have not felt so hot, since a burning ember fell in to my lap.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/21/2021 6:10:00 AM
Ha ha, what a great comment Harry. Thanks my friend.
Date: 2/17/2021 11:23:00 PM
Astounding! Romantic, sensual and beautiful. A delightful read Richard, perfect rhythm and rhyme... Belle
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2021 6:11:00 AM
Thanks so much belle. ;0)
Date: 2/17/2021 2:38:00 PM
WoW! Richard, What a passionate and tasteful romantic write. I found it to be sensual and affectionate; it showed two people expressing their love passionately. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/18/2021 6:12:00 AM
What a superb comment. You made my day. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/17/2021 10:38:00 AM
A passionate write. People with such desire exist in both sexes. Wonderful write. Have a great day ahead. Take care Rama
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2021 1:48:00 PM
Indeed it does. Thanks for your comment Rama. ;0)
Date: 2/17/2021 8:30:00 AM
The sparks will fly when they both ignite. A verse full of fiery passion Richard. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2021 1:48:00 PM
Thanks Tom. ;0)
Date: 2/17/2021 7:09:00 AM
What a great read ! Flowing and well written. Thanks for posting Darrell
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2021 1:49:00 PM
My pleasure Darrell. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 2/17/2021 6:00:00 AM
Exquisite in passion--so well written, Richard! I liked the way you linked the opening and ending of your poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/17/2021 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Vijay. I think when they meet there will be fireworks.
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