Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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03.11.2025
Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Exquisite Lingerie -

   The man in the elevator
   was "caught on the bed"
   in the city's busy shopping center
   He loved trying sexy women's lingerie
   The door opened automatically
   ... an awkward silence
   A revealing moment
   - it wasn't a fitting room

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Terry Miller June 2, 2026 at 2:55 AM This is so funny

William Kelii Kekaula November 6, 2025 at 3:02 AM The fortunate loser, unable to explain himself over the vociferous commotion.

Zyrool Gifford November 5, 2025 at 4:57 AM Hello Anne-Lise, beautifully written. Unlucky for him but for onlookers hilariously funny. Good luck with the contest, my friend.

sara Etgen-Baker November 4, 2025 at 6:16 PM oh, wow! what a surprise! Fabulous contest entry!

Connie Pachecho November 4, 2025 at 12:19 PM Anne, what a wonderful take, ahem, on the contest. Best wishes. (((<>. .<>)))

Jay Narain November 4, 2025 at 11:29 AM Lol! Humorous.

Ghairo Daniels November 4, 2025 at 11:10 AM Very very funny, Anne-Lise, had a goodie laugh ! Hugs your way.xxx

Sotto Poet November 4, 2025 at 5:00 AM Both the man and those who found him are likely experiencing a similar sense of humiliation. Humorously diverting Anne-Lise

Sara Kendrick November 4, 2025 at 4:43 AM Ha!! Ha!! Yes, quite a revealing moment. Thanks for sharing this one that is probably for the contest, if so, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Valsa George November 4, 2025 at 4:24 AM The man and the ones who caught him in the act must be equally embarrassed. Quite hilarious.

Joseph P. DiMino November 4, 2025 at 4:15 AM Wow! Now that could be embarrassing. Should have went to woman's optical first. Very funny. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues November 3, 2025 at 4:07 PM Oh so unfitting…lol