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Exposure, a Sijo

A glinting light fabricated under wilting hallows;
Yet darkness reigns as truth through fallow lanes runs hoarse and shallow;
So light as heaven's feather be the turns of ray and shadow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 10:11:00 AM
Many congrats Aron on notching up big win in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Aron. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:43:00 PM
Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement.
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Date: 5/31/2011 7:05:00 PM
That last line is simply outstanding, Aron. Thinking outside the box with this one! A big congrats to you.
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Date: 5/31/2011 6:33:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Aron
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:03:00 PM
So unusual, and delicate is this! Beautiful poem, Aron! Congratulations!
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:56:00 PM
congrats Aron on your super win in Rick's contest with this awesome entry from the photo luv.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:06:00 PM
Congrats to you !!!
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Date: 3/20/2011 7:58:00 AM
beautfully worded and expressed thought in Sijo, Aron
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Date: 3/19/2011 11:27:00 PM
that last line, wow, great metaphors.
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