Aron Jacob Poet Sijo

Exposure, a Sijo

A glinting light fabricated under wilting hallows;
Yet darkness reigns as truth through fallow lanes runs hoarse and shallow;
So light as heaven's feather be the turns of ray and shadow.

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Dr Hitendra Mehta June 1, 2011 at 10:11 AM Many congrats Aron on notching up big win in ^Rick's contest with this beautiful imagery. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Carol Sunshine Brown June 1, 2011 at 6:30 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win in ^Rick's Sijo contest Aron. Love, Carol

Aron Jacob May 31, 2011 at 7:43 PM Thank you all for your kind words of encouragement.

Andrea Dietrich May 31, 2011 at 7:05 PM That last line is simply outstanding, Aron. Thinking outside the box with this one! A big congrats to you.

Dr.Ram Mehta May 31, 2011 at 6:33 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest, Aron

Carrie Richards May 31, 2011 at 4:03 PM So unusual, and delicate is this! Beautiful poem, Aron! Congratulations!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 31, 2011 at 3:56 PM congrats Aron on your super win in Rick's contest with this awesome entry from the photo luv.. enjoy your top spot with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta March 20, 2011 at 7:58 AM beautfully worded and expressed thought in Sijo, Aron

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2011 at 11:27 PM that last line, wow, great metaphors.