Notes About The Poem

- Expired On Date -

~ The years have treated me nicely ... I can not complain ~

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                 ~  Aging is something that should not be feared ~

                                     - but tastes bad


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                                   ~ The dessert of life ~

                                   No thanks, I'm on diet

                             
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30.04.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Lamoureux Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:44 AM
Hugs back to you.
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 1:04 PM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Doll Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:30 AM
So clever and funny. You made me laugh out loud, Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 9:32 AM
- Thank you very much, Warren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
May 5, 2018 at 12:44 AM
A humorous poem with such a funny pic, love your concluding lines Anne-Lise, oh, guess I'll have to pass on the dessert as well, too bad for us......Maria xxx
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:55 PM
- Thank you very much, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
May 4, 2018 at 11:50 AM
WITTY and funny. Enjoyed. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:54 PM
- Thank you very much, Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Donnelly Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Wouldn't it be great if it was that simple and just say, "No thanks?" My funny bone you've tickled, Anne-Lise, with your words and picture to go with. All the best to you. :) hugs ~ Artsie
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:54 PM
- Thank you very much, Sharon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 9:56 AM
Enjoyed the humour ... Nicely said ...
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:53 PM
- Thank you very much, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 8:35 AM
A humorous perspective. Also love the cartoon.
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:53 PM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 8:29 PM
Wise and witty, Anne-Lise, made me smile, thanks x
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:52 PM
- Thank you very much, Viv :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 4:27 PM
I have to laugh at all the old quotes that make aging sound like so much fun. There isn't much to the golden years for people who are living in the red. LOL Enjoyed your humor very much, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn
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May 2, 2018 at 4:27 PM
I have to laugh at all the old quotes that make aging sound like so much fun. There isn't much to the golden years for people who are living in the red. LOL Enjoyed your humor very much, Sunshine! Hugs, Carolyn
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 2:52 PM
- Thank you very much, Carolyn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 4:27 PM
There is something wrong with this site right now. A lot of my comments are appearing as duplicates. If I try to erase one of them, both are erased. Sorry, Sunshine!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Excellent. Great monoku with lovely picture. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:33 PM
- Thank you very much, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 9:41 AM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! I really loved your Light Verse here and the posted cartoon picture is perfect. --Expired On Date--, eh?? Count me in too!! Very Excellent Work!! (Thanks for your recent comment on the co-write that Liam and I had worked on together. And, I just posted another Lyric poem today under the title: "Deepest Memories and Thoughts." You might find it to be of interest as well!!) Best Always!! Gary
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:32 PM
- Thoughts about getting old :) - Thank you very much, Gary :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parveen Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 9:23 AM
lol , loved it, great pic:)
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:31 PM
- Thank you very much, Tahira :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Faulkner Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 8:43 AM
I love the last one - but they're all great!
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:30 PM
- Thank you very much, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 3:58 PM
Entertaining but profound writing dearest, Anne-Lise! Much enjoyed! Hugs xxx
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:30 PM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Sentiments well expressed!
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:30 PM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 3:05 PM
i agree with all your light reminders, anne... giggles and happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:29 PM
- Thank you very much, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 30, 2018 at 2:46 PM
lol love the pic and great monoku:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:29 PM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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