Poet Tacito Poet Free verse

Exit

Why are you here?

Your familiar skin,
Radiating miscellaneous emptiness

Trembling wanton security
Filled with finite smiles
Infinite complexities

Why should we indulge you again?

A rejected buffet of frozen tenderness,
Aching for high horses to help you gallop

Hunger, no vacancies to reside in your malnourished smile

Wishing for a soldier-in-arms
Wishing for a human-in-arms
As you reach for your step-stool glory
Another dignified teardrop
Stolen by cacti palms

Proverbial residue streaking across glassy 3rd eye
How would our cries
Affect your tomorrow

Meaningless

Why do you return?

Did your rose tints become another concaved agenda?

5 identities, incarcerated
4 revelations, engorged
3 embellishments, glorified
2 pre-judgments, sexualized
1 memory, tainted

Yet, your leech aches for another devouring of serenity.

Hoping to feel #1 again, before expiration
Of your 90 day return policy

Another Cinderella, with a shoe that was never going to fit…

©Drake J. Eszes

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Heather Ober September 4, 2015 at 8:38 PM So I RARELY go on Linked In. I just saw your message today - it was such a pleasant surprise! Always a pleasure to read your poetry. I've been battling writer's block - Reading this poem makes me want to write again. Heather Ober September 6, 2015 at 10:06 PM I've only written 3 poems in the past year. How sad is that? I'm easing back into it though. I hope you write another one soon!! Poet Tacito September 6, 2015 at 8:12 PM HEATHER!!!!!!!!!! :D Super glad you got the LI message! I was surprised as well. I hope you do write something new! I'm ready for it. :)

Funom Makama July 2, 2015 at 10:53 AM Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.

Scott Thirtyseven June 22, 2015 at 8:16 AM Geez mate, what a killer last line!!! Glad I'm not the damsel at the sharp end of this one. Great words. "did your rose tints..." oh what a line. Poet Tacito June 22, 2015 at 10:48 AM Hey Scott! Yes, I'm glad you're not either. lol Many thanks, sir!

Lara Wash June 11, 2015 at 12:38 PM Drake, when I read this "Aching for high horses to help you gallop" that was it for me. Exit is an awesome poem. WOW! Poet Tacito June 22, 2015 at 10:47 AM Hi Lara!!! Yeah, even for me, that particular line gave me goosebumps. I grinned a little, devilishly. :) Thank you so much!

Sarai Virden June 8, 2015 at 3:40 AM I caught up on the past few months of your writing today. This one by far captivated me... resonated deeply. My how I missed your exceptional talent Drake. However, as I read the comments here. I must say, "Fairytales" are really just the realization of what we once believed would remain a dream. Some "Fairytales" do come to life. So many slippers... But only ONE Cinderella! A truly magical write sweetie! Poet Tacito June 22, 2015 at 10:20 AM Sarai! Hey hey hey! I'm very glad to hear things are shining so brightly in your life. Like your commentary, it means a lot to see. Thank you so much. Talk soon! :)

James Marshall Goff June 4, 2015 at 9:47 PM Drake, as your legend continues....again, you break down the human elements of love and life...your work resonates deeply....bravo! Jimbo Poet Tacito June 22, 2015 at 10:18 AM Dude, I've missed you man! This means so much. I hope all is great w/you, Jimbo!!!!! <3

Tara Jennings May 30, 2015 at 10:15 PM My rose tinted glasses want to believe in fairy tales. You reads a woman's insecurities, rejected frozen tenderness, and tells the princess to save them selves. Very pro feminism. The first line breaks me down in preparation for the hard truth. Poet Tacito May 31, 2015 at 11:11 PM That's the thing. We can have happiness, but fairy tales are non-existent...no matter what we're told otherwise. A man/woman, as their partner in that relationship, should be focused on the betterment of each other, not the detriment. Hand holding should only happen when the togetherness is real, not to solve that person's problems. Say NO to baggage!!! Thank you for your thoughts on this, Tara. :)

Charmaine Chircop May 27, 2015 at 4:42 PM Hoping to feel again, making a return ,Removing the mist from a tainted memory. Another Cindirella with a glass slipper that wouldnt fit,makes one ponder about 'She ' and her love,her return,. I can feel a deep wanton feeling of wanting this Cindirella with the right shoe size and without return policy... There is always so much to discover between your lines. Awesome! Poet Tacito May 27, 2015 at 5:23 PM :D Thank you so, so much, Charmaine!!!! Between those lines is what truly matters...

Nette Onclaud May 27, 2015 at 9:59 AM my dear drake!.. what a comeback.. so visceral and filled with a sense of longing amped by a contemporary yet meaningful mood!.. missed ya; huggs! Poet Tacito May 27, 2015 at 10:02 AM WOOOOP WOOP! Spot on darling, Nette! I've missed you too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Richard Lamoureux May 19, 2015 at 8:18 PM Enjoyed giving this one another read! Poet Tacito May 20, 2015 at 7:39 AM +1 :D WOO HOO!

Laura Breidenthal May 16, 2015 at 12:09 AM "Yet, your leech aches for another devouring of serenity."... I know such people... my brother and I both read this, and we both agree its brilliant. I love the initialized questions, very effective and invokes quite a lot of emotions for me. Again, so many lines, but I'll resist quoting them haha. Thanks for the thrill! Always look forward to delving into your poetry. Always, Laura Poet Tacito May 20, 2015 at 7:41 AM LAUUUURAAA!! :D Do not resist!!! lol Thank you so much!

Emile Pinet May 15, 2015 at 10:56 AM This is superb and flows like honeyed hopes, with a bittersweet after taste. Your words took stage and treated the reader to a glimpse of your imagination and poetic skills. A well structured poem with an emotional release launching it into our conscious mind with a subtle impact. Emile #7 Poet Tacito May 15, 2015 at 11:05 AM Hey Emile, cheers & many thanks to you for those kind words. The focus on my structure is really appreciated! I rarely get noted for that. :)

Tim Smith May 15, 2015 at 8:33 AM It takes me to a place where a romantic flame is trying to come back into your life. I enjoyed the last line as well putting a nice perspective on things.....Tim Poet Tacito May 15, 2015 at 9:40 AM That's a very good perspective, Tim. I seriously thank you for that! Cheers sir!

Richard Lamoureux May 15, 2015 at 7:57 AM Wowzer, most impressive! You are a rare talent my friend. You have been away to long. Poet Tacito May 15, 2015 at 9:39 AM :D You rock my soul, Richard. It has been too long. I am sorry. I am always an email away though. :D

Eileen Manassian May 14, 2015 at 9:53 PM There you are....I have missed you! This poem sure let it all out...and then some. I sometimes wonder why I'm here.... ;) Beats me! You better stay this time. Hugs Poet Tacito May 15, 2015 at 9:39 AM I is here! I never really left!! :D I just focused on other aspects of life. Don't wonder why, wonder HOW and embrace the gratitude. ;-) HUGE HUGS!

Joseph May May 14, 2015 at 5:18 PM Your metaphors are outstanding...Great write.. Poet Tacito May 14, 2015 at 5:20 PM Greatly appreciated, Joseph! Many, many thanks!