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Existence - Be Happy

painting life's portrait
                       smiling faces on earth
                         barefoot happy kid.

               
                          read mom's story
                  before eyes close and journey
                        lives forever young.

                         love so tenderly
               heart filled with our memories
                       happiness reveals.

Copyright © Aiyah Torres | Year Posted 2015

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Lynn Marie Date: 2/22/2017 12:28:00 AM ..This is just magical aiyah:-) Beautiful writing, lovely to read :-) blessings, lynn Login to Reply

Len Gasun Date: 1/8/2016 8:11:00 PM I'm so glad to read one of your precious gems this morning my very dear friend, Aiyah! I'm so glad to see you on my poem today. Thank you so much. Hope and pray, you're always doing well. Take care always! love lots, Leonora Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/4/2015 3:38:00 PM ohh, your winsome, happy write delights, aiyah!.. well done!.. huggs Login to Reply

Emile Pinet Date: 7/31/2015 12:17:00 PM The imagery and shear beauty of your words are impressively seasoned by your talent and fill the heart with their magic. Emile. Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 7/31/2015 10:30:00 AM Congrats for your wonderful, winning poem Aiyah! ^_^ Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/31/2015 8:52:00 AM These are indeed happy thoughts, congratulations. Login to Reply

James Inman Date: 7/31/2015 8:31:00 AM Lovely bittersweet write. Fills me with memories. Login to Reply

Casarah Nance Date: 7/31/2015 7:41:00 AM You happy fills me with happiness.. :) Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/31/2015 1:22:00 AM lovely win. SKAT Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 7/31/2015 12:05:00 AM Lovely work, Aiyah, well done, Viv x Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/30/2015 11:25:00 PM Congrats on ur brilliant winning poem Aiyah! Great uplifting work! Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 7/28/2015 8:07:00 PM Deeelightful string! You do paint beautiful life images, Aiyah. Yeah! ...galing-galing! hugs! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/28/2015 3:43:00 AM - This is a pleasure to read, my friend Aiyah ..... so encouraging and playful .... beautiful - (7!!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Eric Boddie Date: 7/27/2015 9:34:00 PM admiration from this beholder much respect from this man due encouragement to keep it going I am indeed your newest fan...;) Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 7/27/2015 10:27:00 AM Aiyah, galing naman!!! Love all but my fave last one!~Olive Eloisa :D! Login to Reply

Afolabi Muideen Date: 7/26/2015 11:52:00 PM This piece is so intriguing, as so much to read this..........A.M. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/26/2015 1:37:00 PM My comment was an observation not a criticism. Some endings are sad. Personally I think version one is best because that was what you felt when writing. Don't let a comment colour your art. Hugs Rick Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 7/27/2015 8:39:00 PM no Rick.. it added more color to my work.. good criticism helps a lot! :) Thank you ^_^

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/26/2015 9:14:00 AM Beautiful but with a sad ending. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 7/26/2015 10:26:00 AM yes you're right! There should be a happy ending! :)thanks! Aiyah Torres Date: 7/26/2015 10:24:00 AM Thank you ,Ric for visiting my land once more :O)) Glad to see your comment back in my poem !! ^_^

Afolabi Muideen Date: 7/26/2015 4:03:00 AM An excellence penned, I love your write.........A.M. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/26/2015 2:22:00 AM love your write on existence, enjoyed your senryu ~S.K.A.T. Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 7/26/2015 10:28:00 AM thanks Skat for supporting my poem!! :O)

Jan Allison Date: 7/25/2015 5:16:00 PM what a wonderful string of senryu - the final one I find so so touching Aiyah:-) hugs Jan xx 7 Login to Reply Aiyah Torres Date: 7/26/2015 10:28:00 AM Thanks Jan !! :O0