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Exiled - Sentinel

Exiled - Sentinel How do I hate this job let me count the waves Poseidon’s icy blasts torment of seadog knaves slashing at my heels billowing candle snuffers intent upon a darkness denuded of all buffers. Fear holds me frozen awash amid the fury victim of a crooked judge and trial without jury. Clanging shackles bind me in service to the sea doing time on foaming shoal never to be free. 4/11/2016 submitted to Sentinel – Quatrain Form – Poetry contest sponsor – Eve Roper

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Date: 4/26/2016 1:07:00 AM
Congratulations John.... hugs. Linda
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Date: 4/15/2016 11:52:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/15/2016 5:02:00 AM
Congrats John on a great write and your contest placement
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Date: 4/14/2016 6:26:00 PM
John, congratulations on your fine win in 'the sentinel contest'. Sandra
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Date: 4/13/2016 1:14:00 PM
If I were judging, this would be in first place. Your talent is so finely expressed in this outstanding piece. If you ever wonder why I don't join in your contests, it is because I know my poetry is not in your league. Not a complaint, just the truth. I really admire your expertise with words. This is excellent! Cheers, Connie
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John Lawless
Date: 4/13/2016 4:17:00 PM
Connie, thank you for your high praise. I wondered why you never showed up in my contests. Please try one...just for fun.

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