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Exhausted poem

Im warn out, and so exhausted,i am trying to just push through, some days I don’t know, if I can even get through, my head is just spinning with all that’s on my mind, I don’t even know if I can get outta bed at times. I put on a brave face and smile through ever single day ,but yet I’m truly struggling and want to go away. I have support of friends and family, this is very true, but I feel like I’m a burden , so no one ever knew, how I am truly feeling and what struggles are on my mind., I am just trying, to stay above the line. I know I will be ok and my days will turn around, I just need to keep both feet solid on the ground. The days will be much brighter and better days are due,I just need to rest my head and keep on pushing through

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Date: 9/18/2024 2:50:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/15/2024 9:20:00 AM
Thankyou for sharing Rachael…sometimes its easier to share with strangers from behind a screen than with the ones who love you. We all have our struggles in life and getting it out is so beneficial compared than keeping it stifled within. I find it easy writing my thoughts in poetry form on Poetry Soup and do not feel judged on here….Welcome to PoetrySoup Rachael….it is a lovely place to be! Sending you a cuddle from Australia! Debx
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Date: 9/30/2024 10:19:00 AM
Hi Rachael….l haven’t been on Poetry Soup much of late due life being incredibly busy so having been doing much reading! I found a good way to get connected with other poets here is start writing positive comments on poems that you like. Many Poets will respond and they will read your poems and so forth! Thats how l got started on here. Its a lovely poetry site and most here are lovely and kind! If you need any advice or help feel free to message me! Hope that helps Rachael….Debx
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Rachael Bennett
Date: 9/17/2024 1:52:00 AM
Thanks so much for responding deb.truly appreciate it. Feel very relaxed here ..have you managed to read my other poems I have posted.?. This is the first and only comment so far but looks like quite a few people have looked at it...happy poetry writing and I will look forward to reading yours too
Date: 9/15/2024 4:05:00 AM
Feedback appreciated first time posting. Write for fun off top of my head .usually at early hours of morning.. never thought I would share these but here i am on bigger platform. sharing with complete strangers so this is a huge step as i have only ever shared with couple close friends and family so this is a big step as never thought it was good enough
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