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With endowed human rights, I feel so blest expressing jubilant gratitude’s best that throbs midst triumphant worshipful zest praising God for His love of mercy-crest. Optimizing human rights, I do cheer dear special child overcoming his fear toward finish line of milestone so clear as I hide my eyes, battling to shed tear. Enjoying human rights, I hear the bliss of soul commending every Brod and Sis while trying to lift from burdens’ abyss those needing help, since courage-zeal they miss. Fighting for human rights, I can’t ignore pleas of abandoned kids that want to soar above mendicancy and begging chore though struggling against selfishness’ war. Practicing human rights, I empathize while listening to friends, heaving out cries giggling likewise when they burst glee’s surprise for miracle-stories of Christ’s supplies. Valuing human rights, I respond now prayerfully fulfilling servant’s vow* of reaching-out as the Lord does allow by faith, pleased to have His divine “wow.”
Ecclesiastes 5:4 When thou vowest a vow unto God, defer not to pay it; for he hath no pleasure in fools: pay that which thou hast vowed. October 22, 2021 Edited on December 3, 2021 2nd place, "Human Rights" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by Robert James Liguori; judged on 12/10/2021.

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Date: 12/11/2021 3:53:00 AM
"Valuing human rights, I respond now prayerfully fulfilling servant’s vow" - Beautiful writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/10/2021 12:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with your "EXEMPLIFYING HUMAN RIGHTS" write. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............
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Date: 10/22/2021 3:26:00 PM
Beata, very nice poem, I really like it and best of luck in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 10/22/2021 1:37:00 PM
Such a piece of beauty Beata, lovely rhyme and flow too. Have a blessed day, Gordon
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Date: 10/22/2021 6:48:00 AM
Beautiful, sweet lady. I love it. It should be a winner! God bless you. Love, Gina
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