Excrushitting

Must make haste
Excruciating!
Time for "waste"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gazbowski Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 8:26 PM
Chuckles :-)
A  Avatar
June 3, 2015 at 11:57 PM
that was funny
Wesley Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 6:36 AM
Hi luv, miss you - so nice to have you visit again. Somehow I lost your email, it's just not there and I have so many wonderful things to send so fill me in and I'll get busy~! Put your email in a soup mail!
D. Avatar
March 13, 2012 at 6:09 AM
very funny haiku there is always time for waste lol
Wesley Avatar
March 3, 2012 at 5:51 PM
Hi Hussain, thanks for your visit, mis your great poems; we all are waiting patiently! :)
Austin Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Thanks for reading my stuff - what shall I call you...M? or M Hussain? or Mr. Effendi? I've read all your poems at least once. Write some more, some more, some more! Love, daver
A   Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 11:52 AM
hi....lol...stopping by to say hi... gonna check if you have anything new... lol.. look at my avatar... i'm looking at you...p.d.
A   Avatar
January 6, 2012 at 7:07 AM
Hello,MHE ;-) how are you? I'm so happy that you stopped by my poem... My poet stamp, I had your name, on it... but, was not to sure about your name... he he he..i hope you don't mind I can't pronounce it... I also don't know if,, Effendi,is your first name... But, your name is on my original poem... lol.. you just have to search for it. i had to shorten the one on the soup. Send me mail..xox~pd
Wesley Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 6:53 PM
I'm tying the title to the last line Hussain; is that how it's supposed to be? Happy new year to you!
Oimbo Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 11:00 AM
It is one of fine haiku I have read today
A   Avatar
December 24, 2011 at 9:29 PM
M.H.E.,... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.
Horsman Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 7:12 AM
what would we do without it, time for waste that is, very funny, enjoyed. harry
Baity Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 11:20 AM
Good one ....smiles...Chiquita
A   Avatar
December 2, 2011 at 10:47 PM
Stopping by to say hi... also toooo check if you had anything new... always,..p.d.
D. Avatar
November 20, 2011 at 2:56 PM
go read jeffry cohan he is an awesome poet
Austin Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 11:52 AM
Thanks for reading me. Love, daver
Wesley Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 9:56 PM
A great effort to be hasty about. A hilarious feeling of desperation keeps a person motivated. I need to have this for a fav.
Breidenthal Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Aha! An excruciatingly GREAT ONE! :D:D Always, Laura
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 8, 2011 at 4:36 PM
This title may cause some at the Soup to be "backed up"...but I say drink some prune juice and let the Shitake go!
A   Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 7:25 PM
Sounds very painful... waste is a time of haste.. vise a versa ..... enjoyed your poem...p.d.
Mister Roboto Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 2:37 PM
Gotta Admit...I like your exhilarating style!
Austin Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 2:29 PM
The title says it all. The last line also. I like the term waste - not nearly as objectionable as the other one. Great humor. Love, daver
Kendrick Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 12:49 PM
Good play on words..You must have had your thinking cap on...Thanks for stopping by...Grits are corn grounded like coarse sand..They have to be cooked about 10 to 20 to tenderize them..There are instant kind which cook faster.. I add salt and pepper to mine as they cook for seasonings..I add butter sometimes, cheese sometimes, and sometimes I have gravy to put on them.. Sara
Kearley Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 10:04 AM
I'm still laughing....Good one!
Effendi Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 7:54 AM
Couldn't help but post this one...
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