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Somehow,

I find myself

content,

confident

and

intrepid

 

. . . intertwining the interval,

these dimensions,

and the embroidery

that sets us apart

 

Even though,

there’s an ache to know

you,

and occupy

your personal space

 

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

a connection unbroken

  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

Right now,

contentment

confidence

and timely dimensions,

enable me

to be,

proximate

________________

 

 

(Tender thoughts) - softly reminding me

* * We're Always a Whisper away * *

. . . and our hearts echo in the wind

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Somehow, 
I find myself
content,
confident
and
intrepid

 . . . intertwining the interval, 
these dimensions,
and the embroidery 
that sets us apart

Even though,
there’s an ache to know
you,
and occupy
your personal space

  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
a connection unbroken
      ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
Right now,
contentment 
confidence 
and timely dimensions,
enable me 
to be,
proximate
________________


(Tender thoughts)  - softly reminding me
* * We're Always a Whisper away * *
   . . . and our hearts echo in the wind
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Scott Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 4:58 PM
Again another beautiful romantic prace xx
Nicole Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 7:25 PM
I appreciate your kind words. Thank you, David. ~ Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 10:06 AM
I wanted you to know I wrote this on Jerry T Curtis page about this write from you. (A powerful write/song. I love both... Have a wonderful day writing/singing away............)
Nicole Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 6:34 PM
Thank you Paula, for sharing your thoughts here with me. I appreciate Jerry placing these words to music. My heart is smiling and floating. : ) Your kindness means so much. : ) Hugs and blessings, Brandy
Curtis Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 4:52 AM
Hope you like it as much as I do ! God Bless
Nicole Avatar
December 14, 2025 at 3:10 PM
Thank you, Jerry. I'm sure I will love what you've created. Many blessings to you.
Curtis Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 5:25 AM
Your delicate use of words have woven the complex fabric of emotions into a beautiful Poem/song. I enjoyed this so much, I put it to music, and with your permission i would like to post it. Please let me know.
Nicole Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 1:54 PM
These words wrap around my heart. To have a deep connection with someone is the best feeling ever. Especially when they feel the same way. This is so beautiful- a ' fabric of emotions.' Thank you Jerry, for the compliment and this wonderful comment. I'm in awe that you have placed this to music. You can post what you've created. I look forward to hearing it. : )
Amah Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 9:20 AM
... words poignantly chosen and an undulating universe of thoughts, this verse remains exclusively crafted on the path of perfection ... a great enjoyment with the enjambments of several hard-mixtures of life!
Nicole Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 7:32 PM
Dear Canny, moments can be reached beyond the wind. They are felt within the heart. Thank you for your lovely comment. So kind of you to say, "this verse remains exclusively crafted on the path of perfection." My heart is smiling. My best to you. :) Brandy
Roper Avatar
May 15, 2023 at 7:22 PM
the embroidery that sets us apart. each stitch a meaning. Beautiful
Nicole Avatar
May 17, 2023 at 6:36 PM
Thank you Eve, for sharing your favorite thought within. Yes, there's a meaning behind every stitch. You and your kind words are appreciated. y best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mchattie Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 2:29 PM
I enjoy your writing very much. As earlier stated... you should write more. It's so different from mine... no one would ever claim my writing to be beautiful... yours is. Stay well my friend.
Nicole Avatar
April 30, 2023 at 7:01 PM
Hi David, thank you for the support and for encouraging me to write more. (Moments in life seem to keep me busy) However, my muse comes out to play when she can. I appreciate you saying my thoughts are beautiful. Just so you know, different is also beautiful. My best to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy
Goldsmith Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 8:44 AM
A wonderful write/picture. I wish you would write more. Have a blessed day writing away................
Nicole Avatar
April 25, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Thank you Paula, for your lovely comment. It seems my muse comes out to play at different times. I appreciate your kind words. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Daniel Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 1:00 AM
Such tender writing, Brandy, blows my breath away:)
Nicole Avatar
April 20, 2023 at 11:36 AM
Thank you, Joanna. I'm smiling with you saying this takes (blows) your breath away. Your kind words are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
DiMino Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 6:55 PM
Lovely read, Nicole; and your images are always breathtaking. For sure, one must love one's self if to be loving, proximate with others. What we are inside, we breathe out, such sweet respiration drawing divine closeness.
Nicole Avatar
April 16, 2023 at 5:10 PM
Joe, I'm smiling with you calling me Nicole. (It's my middle name, by the way). Your thoughts are beautiful and my heart is floating. I completely agree with you, my sweet friend. Love echos within and shines outward. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Baker Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 4:45 PM
It is a joy to read your poetry, Brandy. You open your heart and share that which is there for the experiencing. When I feel intertwining, I feel that love is everywhere and is there for us to experience as deeply as we allow ourselves to meld into it. Your acceptence of what your experience is rare and your ability to share it with us is a blessing, my friend. Write On! we need to hope of your poetry. Hugs, Bill
Nicole Avatar
April 15, 2023 at 6:19 PM
Bill, your thoughts curl gently around me. My heart is right here upon the page, and you're able to feel every emotion. Such a beautiful description of intertwining. Your thoughts hold so much truth. A connection unbroken, is beautiful beyond words. Thank you for the compliment and the lovely comment. My heart is smiling and floating, all at the same time. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Ferry Avatar
April 12, 2023 at 12:58 PM
Content Make it last.. I never can Buena Suerte
Nicole Avatar
April 13, 2023 at 6:25 PM
Contentment is an emotion within that is easy to embrace. Thank you Richard, for your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Brandy
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Dear Brandy, Love your poem, especially these lines "We are Always a Whisper away * * . . . and our hearts echo in the wind". Your poetry is tender and touching ~ the kind of poetry I love to read. Hugs ~ Mala
Nicole Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 9:52 AM
Malabika, I appreciate you sharing your favorite lines in this poem of mine. There's so much truth within, as hearts echo through the wind. Thank you for your lovely comment, my dear friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Mcconnell Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 3:10 PM
Lovely penning Brandy, such lovely use of words with nice imagery and really touching piece. Hope all is well with you, blessings always,Gordon x
Nicole Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Thank you Gordon, for your kind words. Love whispers along the wind, connecting hearts. It's so beautiful and tender, even emotional. I'm doing well. I hope you are too. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Chuuk Avatar
March 31, 2023 at 8:28 PM
Oh Brandy, how delightful to read you again. And my but your poems are always sensational. Please let me know if ever you write a book. :) This gem here shows how confident you are with your ink. Truly beautiful and inspiring. I love it! :)
Nicole Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 6:49 PM
Fin, my heart smiles knowing that you look forward to reading my simple scribbles. I'm breathless with you saying you're waiting if I ever write a book. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your comment and compliment leaves me in awe. Thank you so much, my dear friend. I appreciate you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Watt Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 8:42 PM
Brandy, it's always a treat to read your new scribbles and get lost in your tender poetic thoughts... love the lines "intertwining the interval" and "the embroidery that sets us apart". It is intoxicating when we are allowed to occupy someone's personal space, and to realize it's because they trust us and ultimately, because they love us. I enjoyed your use of the word "proximate" to describe this connection. So beautiful. Keep writing, my dear friend ~ John
Nicole Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 8:00 PM
John, your kind words always bring a smile to my heart. Thank you for sharing what lines are your favorite and why. Yes, it is a wonderful feeling when we can embrace love in this way, and know the feeling is mutual. Trust is there. I felt "proximate" fit at the end, tying my thoughts altogether. I'm happy that you saw the connection as well. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. I certainly will, as time and life allows. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Brandy this is beautiful, touching and far reaching. Very nice :)
Nicole Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 6:08 PM
Thank you, Heidi. You and your kind words are appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Callus Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Many people follow love blindly, but you, Brandy, have the ability to reason clearly and follow a buildup...once you're content with the situation, you feel more confident and adventurous. The next step would be establishing a common-ground 'proximate' communication. ~ Warm regards & hugs my friend. // paul
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Paul, I'm in complete awe, at how you can see me and know my heart, through my words. Your thoughts are true, on how act and react to the situations that surround me. I appreciate you and your lovely comment, my dear sweet friend. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Salehi Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 9:43 AM
There is always pain even when we are content...
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 5:50 PM
A sweet ache will linger, even while being content. Thank you, Pashang. Your thoughts hold so much truth. My best to you. :) Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 6:35 AM
I hope the contentment, confidence, and intrepid spirit always fill your soul, and that love always be held deeply in your heart. And that you always share these beautiful thoughts, through your scribbles, with the rest of us. Warmest hugs, John
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 5:49 PM
Thank you, John. Beyond uncertainty and distance, moments that only touch through the wind, my heart is content. I'm able to see the positive, even through the sweet ache. Of course I will, my dear friend. Your thoughts caress softly around me. I appreciate you and your support. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
May Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 4:31 AM
A connection is there whether near or far, Wonderful write Brandy, Hugs
Nicole Avatar
March 26, 2023 at 5:27 PM
A true statement, Joseph. The heart knows the depth of true love. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Parker Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 9:24 PM
The ache...so profound an image to discuss love intertwined, lust unbridled, completion sought. Lovely, Miss Lion. A heart knows. ~;o]
Nicole Avatar
March 25, 2023 at 6:33 PM
You're right Arlo, only the heart knows. When a connection is made and hearts touch, beyond time and space- that sweet ache vanishes away. Love is a beautiful emotion. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Brandy
Hind Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 9:25 AM
I have been wondering when you would write something else again. Beautiful, beautiful! You have a real gift.
Nicole Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:08 PM
Yes, it's been a while. These words found me, when my muse decided to come out to play. Thank you Paige, for the lovely comment and compliment. You're so kind. My best to you. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Content, confident---exclusive...highly suggestive of love that occupies dreams. Much enjoyed the tender voice of your poem, Brandy, dwelling in that exclusive space you speak of. Delightful to ponder the words that whisper, my friend.
Nicole Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 6:04 PM
In dreams, anything is possible. Everything makes sense and a true connection is made. Always longing and lingering, these emotions seem to touch the heart so deeply. Thank you, Vijay. Your kindness doesn't go unnoticed. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy
Turner Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 8:11 PM
You poured your heart out on this one Brandy. A pleasure to read. I can't imagine what it would feel like to be loved like that.
Nicole Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 5:53 PM
These emotions are true and linger deeply within my heart. Love is overflowing in both dimensions, and it's a wonderful feeling, indeed. Thank you, Daniel. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy
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