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Who or what am I that I should judge? When my heart bears the slightest grudge For I am a mere mortal born in sin My filthy rags, only by his blood, made clean Should I weigh my sins against another’s? Dare to believe I’m far righteous than others? Have we walked in each other's shoes? Has desperation ever given cause to wrongly choose? Can any one live here forever? Has none of us sinned, ever? I pray that we build, and promote through love On the way to a peaceful home above Let’s stay grounded acknowledging that sin is sin Doesn’t matter what kind, all are akin As our Lord alluded in one of many parables And it’s a good example of being charitable Let me take the log out of my eye ‘Ere I remove from my neighbor’s, the fly Aren’t we really just passing through? Alive, only to help others, even a few? So that when we reach the end of our road We may have achieved our goal Then when we stand in the court of the King To give account of these songs we daily sing We’ll accrue mercy for the wrongs we did ‘Come share my kingdom’, would He bid ~*~ For: Joe Flach's, "Here Comes The Judge Contest"

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Date: 3/14/2011 5:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Annalise in Joe Flach's contest "Here Comes the Judge". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on winning in the contest. Joe chose a good one here.
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Date: 3/12/2011 2:37:00 PM
Very moral and uplifting thoughts! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/11/2011 7:46:00 PM
What an amazing end to this perfect poem of yours. many congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/11/2011 1:14:00 PM
Indeed...each one of must account for our own deeds....and who are we to judge?? It is not up to us...but to Him above. Great words to live by, Annalise~ Congratulations on your winning poem! love, Carrie
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:38:00 PM
Congrats Annalise on your fantastic win in Joe's cool contest my friend.. an amazing write and expressive piece on the theme.. enjoy another top ten win with luv..
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Date: 3/11/2011 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of Joe, Annalise
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Date: 3/11/2011 11:32:00 AM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Annalise. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. luv Ralph
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Date: 3/11/2011 10:53:00 AM
Delighted to see your poem in the winners' circle, Annalise. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/6/2011 4:21:00 PM
oh, gosh, at first I thought I was reading for the shoe contest, but hey, if this contest is still going on, I think this is a WINNER. LUv, Adnrea
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Date: 2/5/2011 8:37:00 PM
Come Judgement day, I believe the self appointed judges will find things much more difficult than the sinner. Hope all is well. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:55:00 PM
smile -- tis good, when We are blessed amid the mirror of Our own given reflections and muses my dear and, "Your Treasures," has brought this prism of lights understanding unto All, whom may be so blessed by this canvas of, "Your Beauties," brushed amid brights, work of art ~ and, 'thank you,' for touching my heart within, such a lovely com; "Caramel Sweet" ~ love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/5/2011 4:40:00 PM
smile -- "Hello, 'My Dear Precious & Priceless, Beautiful Annalise Brigham.'" ~ what a very wonderful and light laced painting my dear; although, it were not, fly, from my brother or sister eyes rather, speck, and yet, the message conveys itself within the sweetened hues unto the most precious gift of all, "Love." ~ cont:)
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Date: 2/5/2011 10:00:00 AM
A really good thought in words! Good luck! Thanks for all the nice comments you send.....George
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Date: 2/4/2011 11:00:00 PM
well done! Anna, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:45:00 PM
You have penned some beautiful poetic expressions in this write on the theme of judge... Let me take the log out of my eye...very expressive, Annalise. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/4/2011 4:14:00 PM
What a wonderful poem Annalise.. what a wonderful depiction of judgment ... good luck in the contest my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 2/4/2011 12:28:00 PM
Sweetie, I'd like to believe that those of us who forgive will gain forgiveness from our creator. The title is very clever and the meaningful poem is so sincere and genuine. If this is for one of the contests, you know I'm always puling for you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/4/2011 10:48:00 AM
a compelling write, anna! i still can;t think of anyhting for joe's feat... this one nails the theme on the head! best winning wishes to you!! :) huggs, nette
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