Exchanging Dreams: Shadorma Poem
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EXCHANGING DREAMS
two old men
with retirement’s eyes
exchange dreams
on a bench,
growing tendrils of old age…
as night becomes dim
they recline
like curled sleeves wrinkling,
memories
recycled
on phonograph's needling tunes
crossing young regions
poetic form:shadorma
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* The Shadorma is a short Spanish form, of six unrhymed lines.
As a syllabic poem, it has a strict number of syllables per line:
3 - 5 - 3 - 3 - 7 - 5
For Broken Wing
Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever
8/15/2011
Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2011
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