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Except, In a Memory

There are those moments those times when you know with certainty that they are to be be cherished It could be an obvious one, a wedding or another of life's milestones yet, there are some moments so simple and just so perfect that you say to yourself, I want to hold on to this I must savor this minute, this second, when troubles seem a million miles way and everything fits it's all the way it should be but time is elusive I am remembering a sunny afternoon cradled by a gentle breeze, sparkling pool, tropical promises and surrounded by the love of friends No health issues, no mortgage payments just love and the perplexing problem of just what to have for dinner I knew that I should find a way to keep this day, to never let it end but how can you hold onto something that can’t be held except in a memory at least, there’s that

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Date: 5/29/2018 8:17:00 PM
You've found the eye of the hurricane, so to speak,...and the eye doth not remain forever open... ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/21/2018 4:29:00 PM
A poem to cherish, Mike..just like the moments it depicts. Ending speaks to the essence of your theme.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/21/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thanks Vijay!!
Date: 5/21/2018 4:24:00 PM
Wonderful, Mike. I love your memory about the pool and love of friends. Well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/21/2018 4:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Warren!!!
Date: 5/21/2018 1:38:00 PM
You have found a perfect way to capture those precious moments Mike, I especially love that final stanza:-) hugs jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/21/2018 3:49:00 PM
Thanks Jan xxoo
Date: 5/21/2018 11:16:00 AM
So perfect and true Mike! There are those moments, we just want to last and we cherish in memory. Well written. I love it :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/21/2018 12:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi xxoo

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