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feathered … moony beams daub your lips - the irregularities shaping little cornflower thorns but oh, how supple the pliant press of those luscious fruits (savored like honey) … I touch them delicately with the back of my finger then move lower to your daintily-dimpled chin, and down … I follow the blue beams with my fingertips dancing across your surfaces as little bumps form and your flesh jumps here-and-there telling me I’ve found the sweetest spots, though I’m winding my way to an even dearer dermis and warmer intent … what is the enchantment of these moments - this magic of moonlight that makes me want you so? there is a mad mystery to why such time stops and waits for us, and were it not for the responsibilities of morning, we would hold this moment forever - painted in dreamy shafts of blue trading touches like truths swimming the rill of each other’s soul and haunting a wonder-world - whimsical, immortal and ours … alone. Copyright © Gregory Richard Barden

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Date: 10/16/2024 12:36:00 AM
Dear Greg, i felt like reading you today, as you always weave metaphors in such a magical and mystical manner that leaves me in awe! Reading your words truly inspire me. And the way you paint imagery is so beautiful! And very unique! Love this! The ending is so touching! Heartfelt poem. Especially love “ this magic of moonlight that makes me want you so? there is a mad mystery to why such time stops and waits for us” impeccable! So evocative! Fave it is
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 10/16/2024 7:00:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much, my friend - I think you’re the only one here who still reads my poems, and it means a great deal to me! I have my first book now (Amazon and book stores) on Wheelsong Books and a contract for two more, if you’d like to check it out it’s called ‘Melancholy Moon’. Blessings to you always!

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