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Evolution Of Our Dream ~ Andaree On our wedding day, commingled trunks were we; roots, planted in good soil, held firmly. Together, neath each sunbeam, small limbs grew to gleam with our shared dream. Soon limbs flared; heightened to extreme spread to show our diverse scene. Roots fed well each own dream, for you see on our wedding day, commingled trunks were we. October 7, 2015 Contest: Andaree - 11 Lines' Contest Info Sponsor: Joseph May Syllables: 11, 9, 7, 5, 3, 1, 3, 5, 7, 9, 11 Rhyme: a-a-b-b-c-b-c-b-b-a-a First and Last Line Must Be The Same Checked with howmanysyllables.com

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Date: 10/21/2015 9:24:00 PM
Sandra, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
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Date: 10/18/2015 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your imaginative and precious poem ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/18/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thank you, CayCay, for your support and congrats! It was great to read all the wonderful offerings for the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/18/2015 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Sandra on your win!
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Sandra. Your poem is very beautiful and romantic.
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Date: 10/17/2015 9:05:00 PM
I was positive i'd commented on this poem as i remember the amazing image - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/17/2015 8:50:00 PM
wow, Sandra. This was very clever!! thinking out side the box. I loved it!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/18/2015 5:18:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks again for another inspirational contest. I really love your Andaree form! I appreciate my nice placement, and I look forward to your next contest! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/17/2015 8:33:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/8/2015 6:07:00 AM
What a seductive write here, sincerely, I love how this was beautifully and carefully constructed,also I am intrigued by your voluptuous subject lol! Excellent write............A.M.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/8/2015 7:21:00 PM
Thank you, Afolabi. I appreciate your visit and positive comments very much. Sandra
Date: 10/7/2015 6:51:00 PM
Great, I love the thought of trunks commingling. BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/8/2015 7:21:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate your visit and positive comment. Sandra

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