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"Evil Twin"

"Spiritual Narrative"

After life began,  appeared “Evil Twin” mind’s obvious sin
‘Evil’  naught of nothing, using the power of love’s “something”
Giving rise to evil self, far to left, image of self
Love created, but mind deviated, it’s love abated

Love’s logic created Soul, but I am so bold, left heart’s gold
Lost in a wilderness mind, became the Soul of evil twin
Lost in it’s philosophies, mind’s logic of complexities
Has philosophically debated, Love that created

Saying, ‘how can this Love be the reality of me
I shall exalt above, this creation of heaven’s Love’
But crucifixion of mind regains Love’s self in time
As the mind is refined, Soul is re-aligned, with Love’s vine

Man’s discoveries, pieces of the recoveries, of true self
As pieces of the mind crucified, must learn to abide
From Love light’s truth  cannot hide, reality has not lied
Being one with reality, God true technicality
 
Evil self is naught, except, in a mind of worldly thoughts
Live of your mind if your will, create life’s bitter pill
Your bitter pill will not spill, into Sacred Heart’s will
This proverb is proverbial,  `Tis non swerve able

Within one’s love, one must abide, for on death’s cross it was tried
Also mind must abide, for on the cross was proven it lied
Death and life was set before, human mind to explore
To show evil twin, death’s sin, just no way for death to win

Make a tree good or make a tree evil, for is by man’s choice
Lie on God if your will,   lie `Tis your own bitter pill’
`Tis by your own choice, by your own voice, `Good or Evil’
Death failed, life’s tree stands still, on yonder hill, alive and well

12-25-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/12/2015 5:46:00 AM
Hi John.. This is such a terrific write.. Congrats on being a featured Soup Poet this week! I look forward to reading more...
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Date: 6/12/2015 1:15:00 AM
John, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/4/2010 12:56:00 PM
Congratulations on have two excellent poems among the winners in the first round of the Soup competition, John. I'm so happy for you, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/31/2010 8:56:00 AM
Congrats Moses on your two poems entered making it to the first round of competition in Poetry Soup contest.. way to go my friend.. good luck.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/10/2010 9:42:00 AM
You already know how much I admire your spiritual philosophy, Moses, and this write is a compelling expression of both your talent and the concept of "evil." Wonderful work, my friend! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/7/2010 11:12:00 AM
i like this poem a reminder that evils runs deep in all of us, thats how i took it any way.
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Date: 1/6/2010 9:52:00 AM
power in theses lines runs deep the title grabbed me and i am so very glad it did exellent write
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Date: 1/5/2010 11:03:00 AM
John, this is a most exceptional piece, i thoroughly enjoyed reading this gem >> James
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Date: 1/2/2010 1:21:00 AM
So well written. We must constantly make choices to live right, do the right things, etc. Thanks for reminding me.
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Date: 1/1/2010 7:07:00 PM
Choices they are ours for sure, he gave us free will,,he is all powerful and could have made us love him forever and ever, but it must be in and gained by each of us,,Not forced,, a powerful piece with fabulous faith and more along with truth,,,i truly want to Thank you for sharing this and for the words that you leave behind after reading my words,,,Blessings..cecil
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:34:00 PM
I think I get it, Moses. It's all about focus. Seek spiritual knowledge and truths in order to know love's goodness. Then, take action to live right. Follow the rod (the word of God) to the tree of life with the Holy Spirit as ones daily guide. Remember the love of Christ and be like Him. Serve one another, show forth kindness: deeds & words. Be slow to anger. And when angry, hold the tongue... (Not always easy, though.) Be kind. LOVE one another. God is love. We are in His image. Oh, joy!
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Date: 12/31/2009 4:20:00 AM
Masterfully done Moses...Well written and food for thought...God Bless and Happy New Year....Taz
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Date: 12/28/2009 5:09:00 PM
Good and evil, is born with us, and which one will dominate, is the question... I like how you compare the two in your poetry, "make a tree good or make a tree evil, for is by man's choice"... and thanks so much for your comment on my poem, Into the Future, and I have made my first step into the future and it is a wonderful thing...
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Date: 12/28/2009 4:37:00 PM
the snake is eating it's tale? ;) Light & Love
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Date: 12/28/2009 10:56:00 AM
Moses, Moses, Moses ... EXCELLENT ! The Poem Is Adressing Our Choices ... and States, No Matter What ... Life, Love, Goodness Will Always Come Off The Victor... A Soulful Write ... From Your Country-Gal, Poet-Pal (smile) ... MoonBee
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Date: 12/27/2009 9:00:00 PM
There is a lot of depth in this well written poem that I find very thought provoking. I do believe that love was misused at the beginning and must be restored to the God's centered way. The soul was divided into two identities as you call here, the evil twin, is one of them, the good twin :), the other. Thanks for sharing and allowing me to reflect. Thank you also for your kind comments on my poems. Happy New Year 2010! Caroline.
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Date: 12/27/2009 8:28:00 PM
well done!! I have been working on a poem for your contest. Hope to post soon. enjoyed reading today.
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Date: 12/27/2009 5:46:00 PM
Deeply thought provoking and inspiration words from your pen Moses.. u always give us something to think about beyond the normal realm... enjoyed.. luv your last verse... thankxxx for commenting on my poetry .. much appreciated.. SOUP MAIL..
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Date: 12/27/2009 5:34:00 PM
Exceptional write, JohnMoses! We all have to die to ourselves-the evil twin- to make that choice! ...life's tree stands still...indeed! Peace and love to you! A happy New Year filled with God's blessings!
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Date: 12/27/2009 4:33:00 PM
Very deep...and thought provoking piece you have penned here....intriguing and so eloquent. Life is about choices...we either can walk in God's ways...or the devil's. Powerful message conveyed! Thanks so much for sharing and for your taking the time to read my works. Many thanks too for your always kind comments...loved the little rhyme you came up with! Have a glorious day~Mary
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Date: 12/27/2009 4:14:00 PM
I especially like the last line. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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