Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Alliteration

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- Evil Deeds -

The spirit that remembers the taste of blood
                                          is cold and fearless
                               Lift your head up, set sail to the top
                                  ride high waves, exceed climax
                                    Liars - Death Penalty - Losers
                                 Knock the nickel nail in the coffin
        
                               High tide, rising toxic ... turbo tempo 
                                Rugged, round stones at the bottom,
                                     slippery with long rubber boots

                             Brutally raped, broken - no virgin anymore
                             She carries her own cross, weak and weary 
                                  A secret place, buried in a rusty box 
                                 Woven deep in the ground, gaunt soil
                                      
                           Sleep safe with your mouth closed, not a beep
                          Under four eyes, an external promise - an oath
                               Frail and disappointment, without mercy
                                       No rest, restart ... move on
                         Can you forgive poisonous words and perv actions
                               May your conscience burn brave and blue 
                                    












26.03.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Alliteration poem - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Silent One
2nd place in the contest


Poem of the Day : 28.03.2018

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Susan Mills April 24, 2018 at 2:19 PM enlightening poem. One of my favorites. Congratulations.

Debbie Duncan April 20, 2018 at 9:29 PM Awesome write you got here. Is it about anyone you know? I hope you put it in contest. Because it's a winner :)

James Inman April 20, 2018 at 8:37 PM A deeply moving piece Anne-Lise.

Darlene De Beaulieu April 20, 2018 at 6:49 PM Hello Sunshine Smile, a very sad poem. Have a nice evening my friend. Hugs.

Gary Bateman April 20, 2018 at 4:09 PM Dear Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your win!! I am not surprised at all by this. This is most excellent Alliteration poem with a very forceful message as I alluded to in my earlier comments (below) to you!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Eve Roper April 3, 2018 at 9:45 PM Congratulations on your win, Sunshine, excellent alliteration. Hugs Eve ~`* Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2018 at 2:47 AM - Eve, many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier April 3, 2018 at 3:49 PM Powerful poem, Anne-Lise. Congrats on your well deserved win. Anne-Lise Andresen April 4, 2018 at 2:47 AM - Line, many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George April 3, 2018 at 7:48 AM I agree with Judith. Many congrats on your win. Elaine Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2018 at 12:17 PM - Many thanks for your visit, comment and congrats Elaine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Judith S April 2, 2018 at 8:04 PM I missed your poem when it first came out so ... belated Congrats on POTD and Congrats on your win in the contest Anne-Lise! Definitely an intensely emotional write... you kept the depth of the feeling while still satisfying the use of alliteration. So well done my sweet friend :) ~Judy Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2018 at 12:52 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations X 2, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley April 2, 2018 at 6:22 PM Returning with congratulations, Anne-Lise, on your wonderful win with your powerful poem. Warmest wishes.. Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2018 at 12:52 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless April 2, 2018 at 4:44 PM "Rugged round stones"...a very sharp and caustic use of Alliteration in this harsh write Sunshine. Very well done Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2018 at 12:51 AM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta April 1, 2018 at 10:07 PM Many a deep message ... Congratulations on your nice win, Sunshine ... Anne-Lise Andresen April 2, 2018 at 5:12 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One April 1, 2018 at 2:57 PM A disturbing poem on horrific events no one should suffer from... Congratulations on your placement in the contest... Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 3:33 PM - Thanks so much S.O., you honor me my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel April 1, 2018 at 9:14 AM A deep write, Anne-lise, congratulations on this being honoured as POTD:) Anne-Lise Andresen April 1, 2018 at 11:41 AM - Thank you for your visit and congratulations, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Keith O.J. Hunt March 30, 2018 at 10:01 AM Powerful poem Anne-Lise, keep on fighting the good fight;-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2018 at 11:13 AM - I always do, Keith :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf March 29, 2018 at 3:27 PM Absolutely alarm-raising alliterative attack-mode assault, Anne-Lise! Congrats on POTD. :) Gershon Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2018 at 8:07 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing March 28, 2018 at 6:47 PM Congrats Anne on your magnificent poem... Hugs :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2018 at 7:08 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Akkina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 28, 2018 at 6:32 PM Powerful write Anne...Congrats on POTD Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2018 at 7:07 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile March 28, 2018 at 3:37 PM Congratulations on your POTD. an incredible write Anne-lise xxoo Anne-Lise Andresen March 29, 2018 at 7:07 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Cooper March 28, 2018 at 2:48 PM awesome write. Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2018 at 2:49 PM - I thank you most warmly, Lisa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman March 28, 2018 at 2:07 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise, An extraordinarily well-done alliteration poem. (I think you may have the contest winner with this one!!) Congratulations too on the POTD honor. The four stanzas of your poem with the very descriptive imagery paint a most compelling picture of the salient details of the "evil deeds" at hand. Superb Work!! A FAVE!! Best Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2018 at 2:20 PM - Nice to see you, Gary - Thank you for encouraging words and congratulations - Especially thanks for yours fav. :) - Happy Easter to you and Ingrid :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter March 28, 2018 at 11:07 AM Congratulations!!! Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2018 at 11:42 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Sunlite :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner March 28, 2018 at 10:48 AM Congratulations on POTD Anne Lise. Very thought provoking write. Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2018 at 11:45 AM - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Daniel :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley March 28, 2018 at 8:22 AM Your deep and dark poetic lines speak powerfully of courage and truth Anne-Lise, expressed with beautifully harrowing and intriguing imagery. In your last two lines I see the potential for great resilient strength.. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD honors! Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2018 at 8:30 AM - Thank you for a wonderful and detailed comment and congrats, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Agnes Krampe March 28, 2018 at 7:48 AM Powerful poem, Anne-Lise. Congrats on POTD! Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2018 at 7:52 AM - Many thanks for your congratulations, Agnes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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