Debra L Brown Poet Rhyme

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Evicted

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                               Snow, snow, you have to go.
                   My patience with you is at an all - time low.
                            Pack your bags and hit the road.
                           Take your iceberg and go, go, go.

                            Come on, sun, turn up the heat.
                           I'm so sick of this cold and sleet.
                         Hey, Mr. Sun, Send down your rays.
                           I'm fed up with gloom and haze.

                        Come on, spring, it's time to shine.
                 The robins are here; there are plenty of signs.
                          Now, Mr. Winter, hit the bricks.
                   You've been evicted, and NO! More tricks


                                  Written on 3/17/2022
                             
                                  A BRIAN STRAND 1093 
                         Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 2
                                           ~~ 1st ~~

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Anil Deo April 6, 2022 at 9:45 PM The rhythm, once again, is so HELEN STEINER RICE. But the humor is all Debra L. Brown. Well-spoken blessing. Shalom shalom in Jesus. Debra L Brown April 7, 2022 at 2:11 PM Hi, Anil, thanks for your comment. I'll have to look up Helen Rice. Humor is always good for the soul. Prayers & Blessing ~ Debra

Indiana Shaw March 27, 2022 at 8:09 AM When I saw the title, I just didn't know what to expect, Debra, no wonder poor Mr. Winter comes back even colder the next year, his poor heart is hardened with all those evictions . . . : ( Debra L Brown March 28, 2022 at 10:42 AM Hi! Indiana, Mr. Winter always had a "Cold heart" Never any gentleness in his season. Thanks Indians, I enjoyed your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Bill Baker March 26, 2022 at 2:40 PM A well-deserved win for this fine "bye bye winter" poem. I think it's safe to say, "you're in your zone, Debra". :-) A poet friend in Texas, Bill Debra L Brown March 26, 2022 at 6:04 PM I certainly would like to say goodbye to the snow, but unfortunately. It's "Snowing" outside right now and it's 33 degrees. I may have to take "Winter" to "Mother nature court". LoL. Thanks for your comment, Bill. Enjoy the rest of your weekend. Blessings ~ Debra

Christuraj Alex March 21, 2022 at 9:45 PM "Come on, spring, it's time to shine" - Great invitation. Beautiful. Congratulations! Debra L Brown March 22, 2022 at 12:25 PM Thank you Christuraj for your nice comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Silent One March 21, 2022 at 2:01 PM I hope the snow has gone...winter is slowly fading away.. Debra L Brown March 21, 2022 at 4:42 PM We're showing signs of spring. The daffodils are sending out flower shoots. But we can still get snow. I enjoyed your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Sotto Poet March 21, 2022 at 6:05 AM Debra, we're starting to see indications of spring around here, with lambs in the fields and daffodils in bloom. I hope spring finds its way to you soon. Thanks for your uplifting comments on my page Debra L Brown March 21, 2022 at 4:48 PM There is nothing more precious than a newborn lamb. I hope mother nature has finished with the snow. I have seen it snow in April. Thanks, Sotto, for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Gershon Wolf March 20, 2022 at 4:51 PM There snow renting from you, MS. TOUGH GAL! lol. 1,000% agreed, Debra. Goodbye to Winter and Good Riddance! ~ Robbins a-bobbin' Debra L Brown March 20, 2022 at 5:44 PM I imagine Chicago got their share of snow this year, being up around the lakes. We had heavy ice and snow and on top of that we lost power twice, both times for 3 days. I'm ready for warm weather. I enjoyed your comment. Have a good night. Blessings ~ Debra

Mystic Rose Rose March 19, 2022 at 6:37 PM Glad it was evicted we need spring and all its charms dear lady thankyou for sharing Debra L Brown March 20, 2022 at 5:35 PM I agree. I'm tired of the snow and cold weather. But Jack Frost could still play tricks. Thank you Rose, for stopping by and leaving a comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Ann Foster March 19, 2022 at 1:09 PM Well written. Ann Debra L Brown March 20, 2022 at 5:32 PM Thank you for your kind words. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar March 19, 2022 at 6:16 AM No snow in Malta, but March is full of nasty winds. Debra L Brown March 20, 2022 at 5:30 PM We could still have snow all the way until the end of April. Thank you for your comment. Victor, have a blessed evening. Debra

Rico Leffanta March 18, 2022 at 12:23 PM or you could move to Hawai'i, where it only snows on Mauna Kea/Loa! Aloha! Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 5:00 PM Hi! Rico, I bet the Hawaii is like spring all year round as the flowers are always in bloom. Thanks for your comment. enjoy your weekend. Blessing ~ Debra

Heidi Sands March 18, 2022 at 6:01 AM This is great and I feel the same way Debra!! Well done :) Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 4:54 PM Hi! Heidi, I'd had my fill of snow and ice storms for several years. (lol) I enjoyed your comment. Thank you for taking the time to read this. Blessings ~ Debra

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2022 at 10:34 PM adorable poem. I enjoy this kind of rhyme. Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 4:50 PM Thank you, Andrea, for your kind comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Valsa George March 17, 2022 at 8:32 PM What a playful and lovely write Debra ! I like your invitation to the sun and our merciless dismissal of winter ! May the sun shine on you and spring brings boundless blessings to you ! Really enjoyed this sweet write, dear ! Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 4:44 PM Hi !Vasal, I am certainly ready for spring. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Thanks for reading it. Blessings ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler March 17, 2022 at 5:54 PM I am happy to be seeing signs of spring already, Debra. Today it was unseasonably warm-in the 70's. But I remember one year when we got a huge snowstorm-on April Fool's Day, no less! A lovely poem. Evelyn :) Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 4:48 PM Hello! Evelyn, I recall the snowstorm that hit us on April Fools' Day. Mother Nature, I suppose, is playing a prank on us (lol). Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Tom Cunningham March 17, 2022 at 4:21 PM We're seeing signs of spring here Debra, with lambs in the fields and daffodils blooming. Apart from a few frosts we didn't have any snow here, looks like you got our share lol. Hope spring comes your way soon. Tom Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 4:41 PM Hi! Tom, I'll bet the UK is beautiful this time of year. You're so fortunate. On top of that, we have had a lot of ice storms and heavy snowfall. Thanks for your comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Judy Ball March 17, 2022 at 3:39 PM Hmmmm Here in Alberta it would be no unheard of thing to get a snow storm in May. Once it was May and we got a blizzard that socked in the whole surrounding area for 3 days. Real cute little poem Deb. Loved it and it expressed our feelings of anxiously waiting for Spring flowers and green grass. Good Stuff. God Bless, JB Debra L Brown March 18, 2022 at 4:28 PM Hi! Judy, we have had a crazy winter with a lot of ice storms. I guess it would be kind of hard to avoid snow in Canada. Thanks for your comment. I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Hugs, Debra

Jeff Kyser March 17, 2022 at 12:36 PM I'm hoping we're over the worst of it here in North Alabama - just needs to dry out! Have a blessed (warmer, I hope) day! Debra L Brown March 17, 2022 at 2:39 PM Hi! Jeff, we just had 8 inches of snow here in Northen WV. It has been crazy weather. I lost power for 3 days with no internet. That's been keeping me from reading and posting here on soup. Thanks for reading and commenting. Blessings ~ Debra