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Everything's Okay

Love feels like an illusion; a mix of lies and the truth. For it's non-responsive to the expectations of youth. Facing doubt and frustration, bravado falters, then slips. And yet, in your fantasies, passion congers eager lips. Hope courts imagination, summoning a dreamy smile. And you find your private place, where you haven't been for a while. You're in search of a soulmate who will share your existence. So, you continue to look with undying persistence. You fall in and out of love with ghosts that haunt night and day. And despite your loneliness, think, everything's okay. (Quatrain) 6/21/2015

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Date: 3/6/2018 8:29:00 PM
I love your last stanza, Emile: "You fall in and out of love with the ghosts of yesterday. And yet feigning happiness pretend everything's okay."
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Date: 3/7/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/26/2015 1:14:00 AM
Lovely poem. Thanks for your kind comments on my poem corners of the earth
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Date: 6/26/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks again Diane, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 5:39:00 PM
To me these sound like words coming from experience of life! A most lovely poem, Emile. Congrats on POTD! // paul
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Date: 6/22/2015 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Paul, as always I appreciate your input. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 3:16:00 PM
Congrats Emile, super poem, love the line passion drops from cherry lips! Kind Rgds Laura
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Date: 6/22/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thanks ever so much Laura, I appreciate your friendly support. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on getting the poem of the day:)Alexis
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/22/2015 3:28:00 PM
Thanks Alexis, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 9:16:00 AM
Lovely, Congratulations on Poem of the Day. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/22/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thanks Eve, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 8:45:00 AM
Wow! So many great lines that capture my attention! ~yet within your fantasies, passion drips from cherry lips~ and the last stanza incredible. This was a perfectly chosen poem of the day!! :)
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Date: 6/22/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks so much Casarah for sharing your thoughts, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 7:35:00 AM
Spoken like someone who's been there, done that and in the process gained much. A 7 for this wise piece, Emile. Kim
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Date: 6/22/2015 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Kim, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 5:51:00 AM
How true! I always find my comfort place with God. I like reading all your poems. ~~Darlene
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Date: 6/22/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Darlene, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/22/2015 5:21:00 AM
Brilliant, Emile, and the last verse is an absolute cracker. a fave. Well done. Regards, Viv #7
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Date: 6/22/2015 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Vic, I appreciate all of your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 1:29:00 PM
A good message, Thanks for your kind comments on my poem eleven
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:23:00 PM
Thanks Diane, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 1:16:00 PM
a deep message that allows us to move out of our comfort zones... beautifully written and empowering, emile.. huggs
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:24:00 PM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 1:12:00 PM
This poem expresses so well the heartbreak of young love Emile. It takes up over 80 percent of their thoughts, in fact getting them to focus on other things becomes difficult when they are courting an admired quest. I so enjoyed this poem this morning. I have been through this experience with all four of my kids many times.
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Connie for sharing your thoughts, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 12:50:00 PM
- Love and dreams are like an endless adventure .... some are real and some are imagination .... (or "ghosts of yesterday") - A great poem, Emile !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 11:54:00 AM
Man this is crazy good! To me each word in each sentence was placed just right.
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thanks so much Phillip, I appreciate your kind support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 11:37:00 AM
Emile this is awesome! I especially love your last stanza, brings your message across perfectly.. the pic fits this peace brilliantly as well.. gonna fave it ;) enjoy your Sunday
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:28:00 PM
Thanks so much Wilma, I appreciate your kind words and generous support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 11:22:00 AM
Nicely written, my soul mate basically knocked me alongside my head and said, hello, wakeup, is there anyone there :)
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Ed, as always I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 6/21/2015 11:08:00 AM
So true and wise write, you painted this very beautiful and excellent.........A.M.
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Date: 6/21/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thanks Afolabi, I appreciate your support. Emile.

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