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Everlasting Daffodil

___ Beauty cries upon my eyes of joyous shouts in song arise her tender flesh so pure, untouched in delicate grass sway gentle breeze if not to waste this precious moment I grasp in beauty this gift of gold for only you I pluck a promise and graciously forge onward home in love I place this virgin silk where eyes can dream and beauty gather ___ March, 1, 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/7/2012 6:39:00 AM
A belated congratulations on your win in Francine's contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/6/2012 1:42:00 PM
Rick, I like the way you wove introspection into this poem and used the daffodil as a symbol of your love. Congratlations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2012 10:08:00 AM
congrats Rick on a fab win luv on lovely daffodils.. my fav too..
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Date: 3/6/2012 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on this winning piece Rick xx
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:18:00 AM
glorious piece, rick... happy congrats on your stunning win :) huggs
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Date: 3/6/2012 12:02:00 AM
congrats on your fifth place win Rick, exquisite
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:31:00 PM
you're back with sweet vengeance , rick.. a melody of a piece!... splendidly scribed..:) winning huggs!
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Date: 3/1/2012 1:16:00 PM
Beautiful verse.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 3/1/2012 12:52:00 PM
Beautiful written - here is a poem we can enjoy alot today.....well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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