Everlasting

The beginning of the end eternal emerging in a promise a light shown infinite.........

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/8/2010 5:40:00 PM

You got it Rick , just let the other Male's know you have Pisces on my blog.. I already put it on my contest page, Enjoy,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 9:16:00 AM

Hey, this little Kimo is quite profound! and I would be honored if you used my limerick! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/5/2010 9:18:00 AM

Beautiful haiku that demonstrates your faith, Rick. Important Soup Mail on the way! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/4/2010 9:56:00 PM

Enjoyed your poem Rick, looking forward to the end myself,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/4/2010 8:47:00 PM

Lovely spin on the end of it all.Rick.. if for the contest ..good luck... if just your lovely expression.. very nice.. enjoyed my friend.. with luv.. think u will like my entry for Constance..its "Transformation" ...