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Thought this might not be the right poem for heaven contest  so withdrewhad to redo a bit happy with it now

 

 

 

I sense that there is a kind of heaven, the essence of the natural and divine a Force that watches enters and retreats a star dust whispering to us -- join the eternal benign and as our energy starts to weaken the pain cripples the days and nights breathing requires more force than we have our eyes begin to retreat from the lights One feels a caring energy reaching for me softly asking are you ready, is it time.? in my prayers and chants I asked to be useful joining the star dust into the cosmos creating life leaving at the death of the body and solid earth into the essence of the Universe into the subline

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Date: 3/29/2019 11:18:00 AM
Nice penning Linda, good rhyme and flow too.
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