Ever Living Heavens
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Thought this might not be the right poem for heaven contest so withdrewhad to redo a bit happy with it now
I sense that there is a kind of heaven,
the essence of the natural and divine
a Force that watches enters and retreats
a star dust whispering to us -- join the eternal benign
and as our energy starts to weaken
the pain cripples the days and nights
breathing requires more force than we have
our eyes begin to retreat from the lights
One feels a caring energy reaching for me
softly asking are you ready, is it time.?
in my prayers and chants I asked to be useful
joining the star dust into the cosmos creating life
leaving at the death of the body and solid earth
into the essence of the Universe into the subline
Copyright © Linda Milgate | Year Posted 2018
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