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Ever After

Will you linger with me when July graces the spring- dew of my breath hailing the glow of spring's flowering? How about the end of summer wind gliding on a parasol of cloudy hopes burned by the heat of season's nights? And come bitter November, would your hands cuddle mine in a withered age when flakes chime the whistle of a hundred vague symphonies, except for unsolicited embraces ready to enfold you when votive candles wax uncertain kiln of infallibility-- If so then lead me on, on... when autumn spirals through pensive intervals more frequent than the drift of upturned leaves in a space of unknowing-- how much more can the eternity of dusk sketch the piercing trance of time's flames courting moonlight's evanescence where forever is but destiny's kismet, not ours ? Tell me about love ever after...my arms are hungry again. Best free verse poem October-December 2017 of John Hamilton Re-Submitted 1/5/2018

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Date: 1/9/2018 10:34:00 AM
beautifully expressed sweet Nette, congrats :) -luloo
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Date: 1/6/2018 6:38:00 PM
Wonderful win. Congrats, nette.
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Date: 1/6/2018 1:21:00 PM
Wow Nette, this piece is not only stunning but unique and inspiring! I loved it! Congratulations on your deserving high placement! : )xxoo
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Date: 1/6/2018 8:44:00 AM
So beautiful Nette, congrats on another fine win!
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Date: 12/25/2017 9:11:00 PM
This is beautiful, Nette - congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/25/2017 8:05:00 AM
So beautiful. Your words flow so well in this lyrics my dearest friend, Nette. I love it. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations! Hugs and cheers!
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Date: 12/24/2017 6:40:00 AM
Lovely. Love the finale...my arms are hungry again! Congrats Nette!
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Date: 12/24/2017 3:19:00 AM
As time goes by thoughts of "forever" grow more prevalent in my mind. I'm not sure forever is necessarily a good thing, although, the thought of sharing it with someone you love is a beautiful thought. A lovely write Nette.
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Date: 12/22/2017 10:02:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your win, nette.
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Date: 12/22/2017 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this eloquent elegant pen! xomo :)
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Date: 12/22/2017 9:31:00 PM
Excellent, Nette! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 12/22/2017 5:34:00 PM
..."where forever is but destiny's kismet" Damn, that good. Thanks for entering the contest Nette
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Date: 12/22/2017 5:21:00 PM
Just love your classic style of Poetry nette. beautiful to read, have a merry christmas also to your family and love ones.
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Date: 12/22/2017 4:33:00 PM
you let me glide through life's seasons on love's wings dear poet
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Date: 12/22/2017 2:38:00 PM
Written in precious romantic words..an elegant poem..well done, nette!
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Date: 12/22/2017 1:45:00 PM
- So lovely written, Nette - Luck in the contset - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/22/2017 1:10:00 PM
A beautiful entry for the contest..
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