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Ever Changing

life is ever changing full of obstacles and rearraning life is like a roller coaster ride it's like an ocean of ever changing tides sometimes you have no time to prepare life's ever changing just beware

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Mc Mc

Date: 11/6/2008 7:10:00 AM

TRUTH WITH FANTASTIC RHYMES- ENJOYED THE QUICK WIT AND RHYTHM! THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS AS WELL!! GREAT JOB!!

Janice Smith

Date: 10/16/2008 10:59:00 AM

Deneen, That is one constant we can always count on, change. Change is constant. Nicely expressed in this write. Thank you for your comments on my poems. In His grip.....By His grace....Janice

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 9/28/2008 4:35:00 PM

Wow! Deneen what a remarkable write! How beautifully you have expressed the ups and downs of life by the semile of roller coaster. The conclusion is breathtaking. I am thankful to you for the compliment you have paid to my poem The Magician. God Bless you. - Mohammad

Heidie Buys

Date: 9/28/2008 8:23:00 AM

In the end we can only sit back and try to enjoy the ride. Wise words. Love Heidie

James Foulk

Date: 9/27/2008 9:07:00 AM

very true life is ever changing, all the more reason to keep our eyes on the Lord. a very good piece of poetry. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/27/2008 3:02:00 AM

Beware is right. Truthful and insightful write. Well done. Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 9/27/2008 12:53:00 AM

Change..the rythmn of Life D-nyce.Nice work.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Michael Jordan

Date: 9/26/2008 6:54:00 PM

Deneen - How are you doing - Boy this poem sure does speak volumes of truth and ends in some sound advice - God Bless