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Inspired by Bobby May's poem, 'Time,' posted August 26, 2019.  TY, Bobby!

An ever-vanishing treasure Use time well, in good health, with pleasure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/1/2019 4:19:00 AM
Nothing beats good health... an irreplaceable treasure....
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Date: 9/1/2019 1:04:00 AM
I guess that if we don't look after our health, we won't be able to use our time sensibly and ultimately pleasure will become pain. I do like your outlook on life in this poem my friend, your charming advice is noted tenfold. Well penned Gershon, Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 8/31/2019 10:10:00 PM
Amen to that one!
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Date: 8/30/2019 7:34:00 AM
Great poetic advice my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/30/2019 2:30:00 PM
Appreciate your encouragement, Chris. :) gw
Date: 8/29/2019 8:41:00 PM
Time well spent, is never resented later. This poem inspired my reply for sure!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/29/2019 8:54:00 PM
Thank you for the view and the viewpoint, Caren. Appreciated. :) Gershon

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