Eventide

When God was a burning bush He happened to see Eve's tush Butt wise to his games Eve peed on the flames And disappeared in a whoosh!

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/25/2020 11:42:00 AM

Eve is not naive, she knows the power of pee :)

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/27/2020 11:22:00 AM

I'd say that's a wash? Aloha! Rico

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/24/2020 7:02:00 AM

Good job too!,,great Rico, made my day.

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/24/2020 11:48:00 AM

Mahalo for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 8/24/2020 5:23:00 AM

Oh, this one’s a flaming fave. I did a painting/sculpture of George Bush as the burning bush years ago, when he toted that global warming didn’t exist. Gawd, if I was still doing political art now I would have a lot of orange paint...

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/24/2020 11:47:00 AM

I suspect it would be easier to find ventilators than orange paint! Except in Texas .....Aloha! Rico

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/23/2020 6:58:00 PM

Can't decide, after reading this roaring lol limerick, whether Eve was the first genie or the first Jeannie... ~ Pondering perspicaciously

Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/24/2020 11:49:00 AM

So now God is an entrepreneur trying to bottle the rarest treat? Aloha! Rico

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/23/2020 2:50:00 PM

God made Adam and Eve and a snake named Steve. When Steve told Eve to eat the apple of Eve, Adam told Steve mind your own business, then Adam ate the apple and Steve. oka, your better at this then me, nice one Rico. just wanted to fill up space lol

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/23/2020 2:24:00 PM

hilarious, rico!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/23/2020 12:56:00 PM

ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx