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When God was a burning bush He happened to see Eve's tush Butt wise to his games Eve peed on the flames And disappeared in a whoosh!

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Date: 8/27/2020 5:49:00 PM
She was a great example to us all!
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/28/2020 11:28:00 AM
She bit the apple; Adam kicked the bucket! Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/25/2020 11:42:00 AM
Eve is not naive, she knows the power of pee :)
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/27/2020 11:22:00 AM
I'd say that's a wash? Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/24/2020 7:02:00 AM
Good job too!,,great Rico, made my day.
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/24/2020 11:48:00 AM
Mahalo for reading and commenting! Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/24/2020 5:23:00 AM
Oh, this one’s a flaming fave. I did a painting/sculpture of George Bush as the burning bush years ago, when he toted that global warming didn’t exist. Gawd, if I was still doing political art now I would have a lot of orange paint...
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/24/2020 11:47:00 AM
I suspect it would be easier to find ventilators than orange paint! Except in Texas .....Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/23/2020 6:58:00 PM
Can't decide, after reading this roaring lol limerick, whether Eve was the first genie or the first Jeannie... ~ Pondering perspicaciously
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 8/24/2020 11:49:00 AM
So now God is an entrepreneur trying to bottle the rarest treat? Aloha! Rico
Date: 8/23/2020 2:50:00 PM
God made Adam and Eve and a snake named Steve. When Steve told Eve to eat the apple of Eve, Adam told Steve mind your own business, then Adam ate the apple and Steve. oka, your better at this then me, nice one Rico. just wanted to fill up space lol
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Date: 8/23/2020 2:24:00 PM
hilarious, rico!
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Date: 8/23/2020 12:56:00 PM
ha ha ha:-) hugs jan xx
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