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Event Horizon

You arrived like a rupture in time, some semantic glitch in the fabric, sparking where there was nothing… a rupture before the rapture. I think—no, I know— you were watching before I saw you. The air bent first, whispers in the pressure, like the universe leaning in to hear my last rational thought. Then—impact. Your voice, a blade of static slicing through the hush, laughter curled at the edges like the flame of Prometheus— your hand not quite touching, but gravity-tight, tightening. You orbit too close, little devils of you perched at the curve of my jaw, whispers in my ear like Eris at a wedding, golden apple gleaming between your fingers, asking nothing—offering everything— dares dressed as questions. “Why hesitate?” Your presence is the Big Bang in reverse— not an explosion outward, but a collapse inward— atoms realigning to your will. You speak, and my spine remembers that I was built to bow. Charon must know my name by now. A coin pressed to my tongue, your palm sealing my fate— like Persephone’s pomegranate kiss. I was spontaneous once, but now I am simply reactive, a particle caught in your chain reaction. I should run. Instead, I step closer. And the Nyx of us smiles.

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Date: 4/19/2025 10:46:00 AM
Hi Laura, the cosmos presents some pretty interesting phenomena. When we get caught in the gravitational attraction of an object, seems like there's no choice but to go with the flow. Hope all is well! Take care!!
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Date: 3/27/2025 7:10:00 PM
You're on fire Laura. You have really been on your A game! This is Avant Garde writing. It's exciting as a Poet to enter into the life of your unique work Poetess. Nobody does it like you do. You are destined to entwine with the birth particle of Poetry. "Your voice a blade of static slicing through the hush...little devils of you perched at the curve of my jaw..." Awesome! You are now alive in the truth of your Muse...Justin A FAV!!!
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/29/2025 3:35:00 PM
This is high praise from my favorite poet, Justin <3 I respect you so much I can not express it. Thank you for believing in me for seeing some truth in me <3 Laura
Date: 3/27/2025 5:57:00 AM
Love the cosmic Star Trek reference. Not too familiar with mythology so not sure how the references contribute but I'm sure you placed them well. I guess the question now is: will this end up a big bang or a fizzle?
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/29/2025 3:35:00 PM
Thanks Tom! <3 Laura

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