Evening's Serenade

Evening's Serenade The daytime fades to blue violet shades, as sunlight has bade its shining parade. Bright stars are arrayed like the moon’s bridesmaid, and beds are unmade, in which to be laid. as we are swayed by evening's serenade. 1/5/2017
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Date: 6/4/2017 10:55:00 PM
Reading one beauty after another in this list of winners! Congrats on splendid win!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/6/2017 4:08:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 6/4/2017 5:07:00 PM
Lovely images! Congrats!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/6/2017 4:08:00 PM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 1/15/2017 10:02:00 AM
I am awed by the artful use of that monorhyme throughout! Congratulations :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 6/3/2017 7:33:00 PM
Thanks, Darren
Date: 1/13/2017 7:22:00 PM
Once again: congrats, Janis!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/14/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thanks, Agnes.
Date: 1/13/2017 6:42:00 PM
Janis, this is lovely. Congrats on your win! Janice
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/14/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thanks, Janice.
Date: 1/13/2017 2:11:00 PM
Janis, congratulations on another fine, well-deserved win for your beautiful poem! Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/14/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thanks and hugubac, Janis.
Date: 1/12/2017 3:18:00 PM
Not easy to fit in twelve rhymes and make it flow. Congrats! :-)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/13/2017 9:03:00 AM
Thanks, Mark.
Date: 1/11/2017 3:12:00 AM
Very nice. The flow is wonderful and it takes my mind to peaceful beauty. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thanks, Dane.
Date: 1/10/2017 4:21:00 PM
Beautiful images, Janis!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:08:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 1/10/2017 3:06:00 PM
Such a lovely evening serenade, Janis! Congratulation son placing first!! Regards // paul
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:09:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. Blessings to you,Janis.
Date: 1/10/2017 8:14:00 AM
Congratulations on this beautiful poem and win Janis :)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:10:00 PM
Thanks for your comments.
Date: 1/10/2017 5:36:00 AM
A lovely serenade indeed, congratulations on your top win, Janis:) a 7:)
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/11/2017 2:10:00 PM
Thanks. Jo.
Date: 1/9/2017 10:36:00 PM
Such beautiful descriptions. Sublime is the word to describe this writing of yours. Congrats, Janis.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/9/2017 11:11:00 PM
Thanks Afzal. As always, I appreciate your comments.
Date: 1/9/2017 9:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Janis.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/9/2017 11:12:00 PM
Thanks Agnes. Blessings, Janis
Date: 1/9/2017 8:27:00 PM
So good Janice, congrats on a fine win well deserved!
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/9/2017 11:13:00 PM
A very nice idea for a contest. Thanks for thinking so highly of it.
Date: 1/9/2017 7:59:00 PM
Wow, Janis, another wonderful monorhyme, and a lovely poem so full of tranquil imagery! Congratulations on your fine podium win! Hugs, Sandra
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/9/2017 11:14:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra. Hugubac with blessings to you, Janis.
Date: 1/6/2017 11:25:00 PM
Hi Janis, thank you for this mono rhyme which is absolutely beautiful, I have read so many of them this morning and each and every one of them are brilliant, I have made the mono rhyme one of my favourite styles now along with Sonnets, good luck in the contest and take care.......Vera
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/7/2017 6:02:00 PM
Thanks Vera, your comments are very encouraging.
Date: 1/5/2017 10:30:00 PM
ohh, so beautifully rendered, i'm in 7th heaven, janis!... huggs
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/7/2017 6:03:00 PM
Thanks, nette.
Date: 1/5/2017 2:50:00 PM
Wow, this was beautiful and a perfect entry for the contest. Such a nice flow and the picture it creates in my mind I wondrous. I wish you much luck in the contest
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 1/7/2017 6:04:00 PM
Thanks Chris. I appreciate the well wishes too.
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