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Evening Breeze

A daydream finds a cloud to drift upon As the day withers with the dying sun Bird songs catch the evening breeze As they sing from swaying trees Stars on high will soon appear To give the night its souvenirs The silver moon will show its face On moonbeams you'll find romance's grace As the night slowly dies Dawn will tickle the morning sky With the promise of tomorrow As the winds of hope will follow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/30/2017 6:27:00 PM
You create beautiful images whose voices are so musical. It's so beautiful!
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Date: 1/8/2017 12:20:00 AM
A pleasant, hopeful rhyme, Joseph. I particularly enjoyed 'To give the night its souvenirs.' Another line I wish I had written.
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Date: 1/4/2017 3:27:00 PM
I love this, Joseph. You are at your best writing with such descriptive lines about nature. SEVEN
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Date: 1/4/2017 1:17:00 PM
- Sounds so romantic, Joseph ... like a lovely summer evening - Here we have winter which is stormy, with thunder and cold ... no romantic walk - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/3/2017 3:24:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Joseph:) the first line and the last line are simply stunning:)
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Date: 1/2/2017 8:27:00 PM
Positively uplifting, Joseph. Happy New Year:)
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Joseph May
Date: 1/2/2017 8:36:00 PM
Thank you Daniel...Happy New Year
Date: 1/2/2017 3:54:00 PM
Nicely conceived and composed, Joseph...Enjoyed the read! All my very best for your New Year - Cheers! :) john
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Joseph May
Date: 1/2/2017 5:21:00 PM
Thank you John...All the best for the New Year
Date: 1/2/2017 2:30:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful imagery Joseph - we have just been out for a long walk - there is a low crescent moon and the sky is so so clear it was wonderful:-) Happy New Year:-) hugs Jan xx
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Joseph May
Date: 1/2/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Jan..It sounds romantic...Happy New Year!..

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