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Evening

Lights in windows come alive Children go indoors for supper Shadows stretch, sun slowly hides Birds are winging home Labors called inside And the dark side of our valley welcomes the evening star (approx. 3 min. 10 seconds) For Matt Caliri's contest 'Write Now'

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Brian Strand

Date: 9/14/2009 12:44:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/12/2009 11:59:00 AM

Carrie, nice work for 3 min 10 seconds, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/12/2009 7:38:00 AM

Wow! Just incredible Carrie!!! Warmest congrats on your BIG win in Matt's contest. So well deserved! Hope you are feeling better. Love & hugs, shar xoxo

Elaine George

Date: 9/12/2009 6:40:00 AM

Beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Matt's contest. Love, Lainie

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 9/12/2009 5:13:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, You did it well! Your 10 second “Write Now” poem, ranked 3rd among the winners. You did at great job. Keep up the great writing. SMILES… Dane Ann

Constance La France

Date: 9/11/2009 4:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your third place win.. I like the line.... birds are winging home..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/11/2009 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest Carrie.Love, Carol

Sara Lokken

Date: 8/14/2009 8:14:00 AM

In only three mins, that is pretty good! I can feel the atmosphere invoked here. Love, Sara:)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/13/2009 5:09:00 AM

Since your kind comment on my poem I have started reading some of yours...needless to say...Great stuff! Ain't it a blast?? All the best to you - Tim

Jim Wilson

Date: 8/12/2009 10:09:00 AM

Beautiful landscape poem. A great moment of transision. Thanks for your comment on "Beagles".

Brian Strand

Date: 8/12/2009 8:24:00 AM

Bestb wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for youre welome comments today.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/12/2009 6:03:00 AM

Awesome. You always come up with the best. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol

Charlene Bird

Date: 8/11/2009 8:46:00 PM

Beautifully painted Carrie, a lovely evening whisking the light of day into night. Good luck in the contest!