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Evening

Lights in windows come alive
Children go indoors for supper
Shadows stretch, sun slowly hides
Birds are winging home
Labors called inside
And the dark side of our valley welcomes the evening star




(approx. 3 min.  10 seconds)

For Matt Caliri's contest 'Write Now'

Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2009

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Brian Strand Date: 9/14/2009 12:44:00 AM Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian Login to Reply

Raul Moreno Date: 9/12/2009 11:59:00 AM Carrie, nice work for 3 min 10 seconds, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 9/12/2009 7:38:00 AM Wow! Just incredible Carrie!!! Warmest congrats on your BIG win in Matt's contest. So well deserved! Hope you are feeling better. Love & hugs, shar xoxo Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 9/12/2009 6:40:00 AM Beautiful, Carrie. Congratulations on your very well deserved win in Matt's contest. Love, Lainie Login to Reply

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 9/12/2009 5:13:00 AM Congratulations Carrie, You did it well! Your 10 second “Write Now” poem, ranked 3rd among the winners. You did at great job. Keep up the great writing. SMILES… Dane Ann Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 9/11/2009 4:31:00 PM Congratulations on your third place win.. I like the line.... birds are winging home.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/11/2009 12:59:00 PM Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest Carrie.Love, Carol Login to Reply

Sara Lokken Date: 8/14/2009 8:14:00 AM In only three mins, that is pretty good! I can feel the atmosphere invoked here. Love, Sara:) Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 8/13/2009 5:09:00 AM Since your kind comment on my poem I have started reading some of yours...needless to say...Great stuff! Ain't it a blast?? All the best to you - Tim Login to Reply

Jim Wilson Date: 8/12/2009 10:09:00 AM Beautiful landscape poem. A great moment of transision. Thanks for your comment on "Beagles". Login to Reply

Brian Strand Date: 8/12/2009 8:24:00 AM Bestb wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for youre welome comments today. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/12/2009 6:03:00 AM Awesome. You always come up with the best. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Charlene Bird Date: 8/11/2009 8:46:00 PM Beautifully painted Carrie, a lovely evening whisking the light of day into night. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply