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sun to bed 'neath a soft quilt of stars ... nightingale song drifts like hookah smoke ... crickets rub their legs - violins that weave magic through sweet night mists, beckoning to dreams to come dance in the dusk - spin ... on breaths of twilight. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Pick-A-Title, Volume 17 - Yalto" Poetry Contest, Edward Ibeh, Judge & Sponsor. ( Syllables = 3, 4, 2, 4, 5, 3, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 5, 6, 1, 5, counted at HowManySyllables.com )

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Date: 5/22/2020 2:08:00 AM
Fantastic imagery in this beautiful verse, Greg,congratulations on your well deserved win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/20/2020 3:16:00 PM
Wow Greg! This is divine! Congratulations on your deserving first place win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/20/2020 1:33:00 PM
Just love the picture you created - "quilt of stars" - with your rich and dreamy imagery. Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 5/20/2020 10:28:00 AM
Enjoyed the quiet descent into evening... on breaths of twilight. Congrats on your win, Bard
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:49:00 AM
Soothing imagery and mystical words. Congratulations Gregory :)
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Date: 5/20/2020 7:37:00 AM
Such a beautiful and calming image! Congratulations, Greg!
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Date: 5/20/2020 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on winning first place in my contest, Gregory:-) Such a brilliant poem!
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Date: 5/19/2020 6:15:00 AM
Beautiful and witty. Words of gracious flow, developing extra limbs to double-embrace the mind.
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Date: 5/18/2020 1:11:00 PM
A nice little creation here...an orchestra of crickets...
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Date: 5/18/2020 12:42:00 PM
Well done G, love it!!
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