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Even Then

As I write I am reminded of my faults, the numerous times I fell by my hand. Yet, even while I bled, I dreamt of my best. Even while I gasped for breath, I dreamt of my next. Even while I lost the will to be, I dreamt of a smile, her smile.

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Date: 10/24/2024 3:55:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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