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speakeasy | White photography, Walking in the rain, Black and white

Though hued October canopies the earth I picture you in shadows without mirth A forlorn gaze nestling on the threadbare wind While my eyes reflect time which can’t appease This burst of anguish on one ghastly day. Beyond pathways, our fervor's demise ends When lucent nights once imbued harmony: Yet I roam with you before morn unfolds Leaving me nameless in umbra of tears. Your silhouette dips...my breath fails to rise. For Brian Strand: Completely Your Choice (4) Contest 9/8/2020

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Date: 9/8/2020 7:28:00 PM
You paint this words like a film noir.
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Date: 9/7/2020 3:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. I can feel the rain drops. Have a wonderful day..................
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Date: 9/6/2020 8:20:00 PM
threadbare wind, love the line. congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/6/2020 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win. It was nice to come back and find you still writing and winning. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/6/2020 5:19:00 PM
a forlorn gaze nestling on the threadbare wind...leaving me nameless in umbra of teas...such beauty in those words. Congrats on the top win Nette.
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:52:00 PM
Beautiful Nette. Congrats on the win! Linda
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:19:00 PM
Nette congrats on you top win!:)
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Date: 9/6/2020 4:03:00 PM
Lovely write. Congratulations on your win. Best wishes, Bryan
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Date: 9/6/2020 3:01:00 PM
so amazing when you write like this, Nette. which is pretty much ALWAYS. Big congrats on a top win,
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Date: 9/6/2020 2:50:00 PM
Captivating emotions you painted here, Nette--fading into umbra of tears. The ending says it all....your silhouette dips...my breath fails to rise...
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Date: 9/6/2020 2:18:00 PM
A touch of mystery here...Enjoyed the read...
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