European Holiday

octave of forty words

Forty years - man and wife
long time friends celebrate life
on holiday, pure pleasure bound
four couples, eight countries found.
City ruins, castles, churches, canals,
lots of leisure, legendary locales,
river bends and mountain peaks,
whirlwind journey, two short weeks.


written 24 January 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/31/2016 11:17:00 PM
Reason, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)
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Date: 1/28/2016 12:22:00 AM
Wonderful write Reason ..Congrats on big win!!
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Date: 1/26/2016 12:15:00 PM
REASON, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/26/2016 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans
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Date: 1/25/2016 9:01:00 PM
I would rate this one at the top. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/25/2016 8:47:00 PM
Sounds like you should plan to go back.. It sounds lovely. congratulations on this win.
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Date: 1/25/2016 5:48:00 PM
sounds like an amazing journey - love the rhyme and alliteration congrats on your win Reason:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/24/2016 8:30:00 PM
Like your poem on a fun subject...seems like you packed in a lot of good times in two short weeks. Good luck in contest!
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Date: 1/26/2016 5:14:00 PM
With Trafalgar Tours, it was a blessed, safe, happy trip which we will remember for the remainder of ours lives. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 1/24/2016 4:57:00 AM
excellent write and a nice holiday there...best of luck in the contest
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