Eureka

spent steps near a Gate soul nearly returned to Eden hidden portal search For a Query: Standing before a nearly hidden, rusting, ornate gate, peering in and realizing we have found Eden. A long struggle for man has begun to end, and a fresh beginning awaits. Clear has mud. :o))

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John Read

Date: 10/13/2024 3:53:00 AM

Cheers Arlo I'm still working towards my Eden.

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/13/2024 9:26:00 AM

Keep on the path, JR. Hopefully some folks will help you along the way. :o))

Keith D Trestrail

Date: 10/11/2024 7:52:00 PM

What’s behind the hidden portal I wonder?

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/11/2024 11:28:00 PM

The answer to all your queries, KT, forever. :o))

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/11/2024 11:53:00 AM

Arlo, how sweet of you to explain this to Suzette. That really clarified things. Thank you.. I liked the maning of the Senryu very much. It appeals to our higher nature, Pangie

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/11/2024 7:46:00 PM

Sometimes our messages just need a little "push". Thanks 4 the visit, Pangie. :o))

Suzette Richards

Date: 10/10/2024 4:07:00 AM

I'm not sure that I quite get the reference here, Arlo. Please elaborate. :)

Suzette Richards
Date: 10/10/2024 7:09:00 PM

Thanks :)

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/10/2024 12:39:00 PM

Standing before a nearly hidden, rusting, ornate gate, peering in and realizing we have found Eden. A long struggle for man has begun to end, and a fresh beginning awaits. Clear has mud. :o))