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Euphoria

I fly over an eventide-oak - the moon’s superimposed smile illuminating my diamond wings of euphoria, born from his proffered knee. The moon’s superimposed smile at tipsy heights, where bluebirds fly. Of euphoria, born from his proffered knee, the catalyst of uplifting happiness. At tipsy heights, where bluebirds fly, my heart flutters - I’m primed to be kissed. The catalyst of uplifting happiness, the clouds, like a trampoline, send me! My heart flutters - I’m primed to be kissed over this etched tree of ours. The clouds, like a trampoline, send me past our initials in its frame. Over this etched tree of ours, inspired by young love’s destiny, past our initials in a frame - rhapsodic fireworks, shaped like hearts. 2/13/2023 Writing Challenge - E Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Form used: Pantoum (Imperfect)*
*As per PS’s definition, an imperfect pantoum does not use the lines in the first verse.

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Date: 2/21/2023 10:00:00 AM
Kim, nice poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, blessings, Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:47:00 PM
Thank you,Constance! :)
Date: 2/16/2023 4:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Excellent form and I loved the imagery and descriptions. :-) Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:47:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 2/16/2023 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/21/2023 6:48:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 2/15/2023 10:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2023 11:13:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 2/15/2023 3:16:00 AM
Beautifully penned Kim, Congrats on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/15/2023 5:33:00 AM
Thank you, Joe!
Date: 2/14/2023 8:29:00 PM
Beautiful penning, Kim ! Deep emotions of lifting joy. The euphoria you experience is palpable to others too! Congratulations on your win !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2023 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 2/14/2023 12:07:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, Kim! This was one that I found to be really enjoyable... Your kindness and compassion shine through this great pantoum.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2023 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 2/14/2023 8:13:00 AM
- An excellent poem, Kim ... love it :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2023 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so much, sweet friend!
Date: 2/13/2023 6:41:00 PM
Better than Tom Sawyer and Becky any old day of the week. Fine penning, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2023 9:22:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 2/13/2023 3:47:00 PM
Very romantic and vividly descriptive, Kim. Well done pantoum! Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2023 4:13:00 PM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Date: 2/13/2023 11:40:00 AM
A grand pantoum on the subject for the contest. So well composed. Best for a win. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2023 12:26:00 PM
Thank you! Hugs
Date: 2/13/2023 10:29:00 AM
Loved it. I enjoyed every bit of this masterpiece!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/13/2023 12:27:00 PM
Thank you!

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