Euphoria

I fly over an eventide-oak - the moon’s superimposed smile illuminating my diamond wings of euphoria, born from his proffered knee. The moon’s superimposed smile at tipsy heights, where bluebirds fly. Of euphoria, born from his proffered knee, the catalyst of uplifting happiness. At tipsy heights, where bluebirds fly, my heart flutters - I’m primed to be kissed. The catalyst of uplifting happiness, the clouds, like a trampoline, send me! My heart flutters - I’m primed to be kissed over this etched tree of ours. The clouds, like a trampoline, send me past our initials in its frame. Over this etched tree of ours, inspired by young love’s destiny, past our initials in a frame - rhapsodic fireworks, shaped like hearts. 2/13/2023 Writing Challenge - E Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Form used: Pantoum (Imperfect)*
*As per PS’s definition, an imperfect pantoum does not use the lines in the first verse.
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La France Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 10:00 AM
Kim, nice poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - E Words, well done, blessings, Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Thank you,Constance! :)
Baker Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 4:21 PM
Congrats on your win, Kim. Excellent form and I loved the imagery and descriptions. :-) Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:47 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 16, 2023 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. Have a blessed day writing away.................
Rodrigues Avatar
February 21, 2023 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 10:49 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
May Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Beautifully penned Kim, Congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
February 15, 2023 at 5:33 AM
Thank you, Joe!
George Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:29 PM
Beautiful penning, Kim ! Deep emotions of lifting joy. The euphoria you experience is palpable to others too! Congratulations on your win !
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Poet Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 12:07 PM
Congratulation on your win, Kim! This was one that I found to be really enjoyable... Your kindness and compassion shine through this great pantoum.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 9:07 PM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Andresen Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:13 AM
- An excellent poem, Kim ... love it :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
February 14, 2023 at 8:59 AM
Thanks so much, sweet friend!
Wolf Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 6:41 PM
Better than Tom Sawyer and Becky any old day of the week. Fine penning, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Thank you! :)
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 3:47 PM
Very romantic and vividly descriptive, Kim. Well done pantoum! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 4:13 PM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 11:40 AM
A grand pantoum on the subject for the contest. So well composed. Best for a win. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 12:26 PM
Thank you! Hugs
Vangaveti Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 10:29 AM
Loved it. I enjoyed every bit of this masterpiece!
Rodrigues Avatar
February 13, 2023 at 12:27 PM
Thank you!
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