Ethereal Lanterns

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for the contest Ethereal Lantern sponsored by Ink Empress

The ethereal lantern carries a flame lit by the soul that shines a glorious glow of spirituality upon our lifeforce with visions of serene beauty painted from the palette of unknown color whose stream of luminosity guides us on the lighted path beyond the invisible realm to be a harvester of honey-scented essence plucked from the fruited tree of life whose roots radiate deep within where it seeks to find paradise an endless fountain of understanding

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Ink Empress

Date: 4/8/2024 2:04:00 AM

Dear frederick, this is absolutely gorgeous, so celestial and heartfelt how youv expressed and written in a spiritual manner. From the very first line till the end i was captivated by the way youv painted imagery and written in such a moving rhythm. I especially loved “ plucked from the fruited tree of life whose roots radiate deep within where it seeks to find paradise“ and the last line too really stood out for me. You have a way with words and this is no exception! Impeccable! Congratulations

Silent One

Date: 3/12/2024 12:28:00 PM

An excellent take on this contest.. you wrote it how the sponsor would like it.. Nice arrangement of words and imagery my friend..