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Ethereal Or Expedition Words Sponsored by: Constance La France

Written 9/13/2023

"Thirsty and parch earth, opens its gateways to cool rain, bringing utter silence awe and relief as the rain leaves behind a radiant arch of colors." Quote by poet A breeze swirls a pleasant morning insane scent announces incessant oncoming . lovingkindness of ethereal rain, rinse out and cool the parched earth stress being. Utter silence sun stairway did bestow, spring idyllic day of earth rhythmic dance. A garden's heart breathing anew rainbow. God's faithful vow of soulful dalliance.

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Date: 9/24/2023 7:01:00 AM
Eve, beautiful, congratulations on your win in my contest, I love your poem and the quote, well done.
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Date: 9/21/2023 10:48:00 AM
A quotes gateway opens an ethereal poem, as God's vow closes it. Stunning (both) with the image appendage. You paint our dear earth with love, great entry, Eve!
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:44:00 AM
Very creative and lovely, Eve:)
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Date: 9/14/2023 1:44:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning, the way you’ve painted imagery and flow of your lines truly is mellifluous and ethereal. Loved this one. Definitely a winning take. Goodluck for the contest
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:33:00 AM
Beautifully done. God bless you, love, Gina
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Date: 9/13/2023 2:10:00 AM
- A beautiful picture with your words, Eve - A beauty for everyone's hearts :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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