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He reached his fingers to the stars willed his legs to move forced his head so far back that in his body's arc his dance's bridge allowed sunlight particles (elated faeries) to traverse He saw his lean lithe body pirouette and position, ran screaming from one side to the next in a perpetual wish to catch that last step, that last grand pointe, to capture small smiles for infinity in his psyche He said adieu to his last dance; farewell to the music only his ears could capture, goodbye to a world of ballet his choreography no longer visible, but still resonating in time and space where once he moved. *** April 6, 2017 Copyright ©Darren White

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Date: 4/14/2017 3:00:00 PM
Beautiful Boo. Your words carry you know. In words, you dance still. <3
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Jason Williams
Date: 4/14/2017 3:04:00 PM
*carry you NOW*
Date: 4/6/2017 7:55:00 PM
This is incredibly beautiful and sad. I hope from the bottom of my heart Darren that one day 'the other side' will be part of this reality, not just a dream.:) Amitiés
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Darren White
Date: 4/7/2017 12:37:00 AM
I certainly hope so too, I miss it very much, thank you Anne-Marie :)
Date: 4/6/2017 7:04:00 PM
What a lovely piece of music to match this great poem, Duir! A special piece indeed mate!
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Darren White
Date: 4/7/2017 12:36:00 AM
Hi there Budgie, and yeah, isn't it? It fits perfectly!
Date: 4/6/2017 7:01:00 PM
Beautiful in content and in the way you positioned your verses with movement. Loved it! 7
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Darren White
Date: 4/7/2017 12:36:00 AM
Thank you so much for the 7, and for loving the dancing of the words themselves :)
Date: 4/6/2017 6:49:00 PM
Your words carry the dance Darren and so beautifully that you take us there with you <3
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Darren White
Date: 4/7/2017 12:35:00 AM
I love taking you there my dear friend <3
Date: 4/6/2017 2:53:00 PM
This is life's path Darren always music in his soul, you have also my friend, you also like to share, to care, to capture life...Seren
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 2:59:00 PM
It is, and music and dance will always be in my soul :) And I am happy with good friends Seren <3
Date: 4/6/2017 1:01:00 PM
I'm not sure I'd call it "cute" but it is moving and full of rich passionate depth. "Farewell to the music only his ears could capture" is my favorite line. Beautiful
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thanks Phillip, my heart and soul are in there :)
Date: 4/6/2017 11:31:00 AM
Such heartfelt,passionate,sad and yet so cute imaginative write Darren....Thoroughly enjoyed it....A 7
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 11:34:00 AM
Anand, thank you so very much for your kind words, also for your 7 :)
Date: 4/6/2017 10:40:00 AM
It still resonates in his soul as well... Such an amazing piece of poetry...A fav
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 11:33:00 AM
Tim, my friend, thank you so much for the fav. And yes, in his soul and his heart, always.
Date: 4/6/2017 7:09:00 AM
My friend this was written so well but the thread of sadness I feel is overwhelming to me. I will not go into details but this really touched me. Your writing is amazing and your talent dances all over this page.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 7:13:00 AM
You are so perceptive.... Thank you for noticing that... Also thank you for loving my writing.
Date: 4/6/2017 6:22:00 AM
Darren, I felt the air lift beneath me as this poetic dance lifted me with its wonderfully visual beauty.
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 6:34:00 AM
Thank you for seeing and feeling with me the movement and speed and visuality, that pleases me :)
Date: 4/6/2017 5:57:00 AM
Good Morning Beautiful Darren. This is over the top with stunningness and exquisiteness. I read your words with honor and thankfulness. You know how to capture your reader. He may had said adieu to his last dance physically but he will never say adieu in his mind and is his dreams. May the flight live on in all fantasies. This is so beautiful and emotional too. Well done in its entirety Darren. Honestly. I hope today is a good day for you, how are you doing?
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 6:33:00 AM
Good morning Lisa! I am so happy you love mu dance poem. I know I often write about it, but it had been and still is such an important part of my life. And as long as I can find beautiful words to write about ballet, I guess I will :) Today is the first day I am starting to feel better, that kames me happy, thank you for asking my friend.
Date: 4/6/2017 2:20:00 AM
Intriguing write Darren, I will return after I get more sleep, can further absorb and hit play without waking my hubby, a retired contemporary dancer with whom I want to share this. Hope you are well. Warm thoughts & hugs, mo
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/6/2017 2:40:00 AM
...soupmail ;)
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Darren White
Date: 4/6/2017 2:23:00 AM
aha! Another retired dancer :) My retirement was a forced one, I hope his wasn't... Thank you, mo :)

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